3 thoughts on “Urban Artifacts: Phase 2”

  1. You did great in terms of clean lines but i agree with jingyi, try making your ambiguous seem less obvious and literal. Perhaps filling in the border.

  2. There’s intrigue in your stable designs by having situated your figures off to the side. The first image makes me think of a person drinking something or having their hat fall off, while the second image gives me the impression of a person standing next to a bed or behind a cash register. Jingyi and Marcus have already commented on how your ambiguous designs feel more stable, so I think you might want to try having your figures overlap in those images to fulfill the purpose of forming negative shapes in the ground.

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