There’s a lot of potential in your broad range collage for a strong composition thanks to all of the interesting cutouts you’ve assembled, but I’m not really sure where the focal point is because my eyes are drawn all over the place by all of the different arrangements of values. Also, you want to avoid cutouts where you have recognizable features like eyes, to maintain the sense of abstraction.
There’s a lot of potential in your broad range collage for a strong composition thanks to all of the interesting cutouts you’ve assembled, but I’m not really sure where the focal point is because my eyes are drawn all over the place by all of the different arrangements of values. Also, you want to avoid cutouts where you have recognizable features like eyes, to maintain the sense of abstraction.