Author: amilyonm

Ingredients for Friendship

  • 1 full cup of humor
  • 1 1/2 cup of honesty
  • 2 cups of caring
  • 3 full cups of loyalty !
  • 5 cups of being YOU!!!
  • 3 cups of being able to be there for him/her

Instructions- start with a small conversation. continue from there. if you want exchange numbers. once again, DON’T FORCE ANYTHING!!!

Poem on Sleeping

Sleep, sleep , sleep

Oh how peaceful you are

comfortable bed

So nice and warm

mines forever

never letting go

sleep , sleep ,sleep

how dark the room is

deep into sleep

its that easy

you’re head into the pillow

which is so cold


soon i will fall asleep.

Recipe on a Good Sleep

1.Bed – full/queen/king

2. soft comfortable blankets

3.cold , clean pillows

4. complete darkness

5. QUIET!!!!!!

Instructions – when you’re in bed make sure you are comfortable. if not, YOU WILL NOT FALL ASLEEP. Lastly, enjoy the next couple of hours.

Response to Donald Murray Reading

While reading this, i realize that i personally do not re-read my own work nor do i revise my work. i simply just write and edit , re-write it and hand it in. what shocked me was the professors that read Murray book and felt as if they didn’t know what they were doing anymore.  This article and the “Shitty” articles are similar in many ways.

Quote from Murray Article from a professor ” My students are smarter than i am. I have to rewrite and rewrite many drafts”.  He felt embarrassed because he had to rewrite over and over again. I don’t think that makes you question your intelligence.

Recipe For Sleep

Response to “Navigating Genres”

Honestly , it all depends on what you are writing. i personally wouldn’t put anything personal on Facebook. Everybody on that app has put some B.S or just wants to post but overall, there has been  post that are true,heartwarming, scary,photoshopped and more. Facebook is not an app you want to play with meaning – you can be watched and stalked. Some rules that i keep in my head – well i only keep one rule – to be completely honest and hold nothing back PERIOD!!!!!!!!!

Response to “Shitty First Draft”

I do not write “Down Draft”, “Up Draft” nor do i write a “Dental Draft” , i personally feel like its a waste of time to write all those drafts for one final draft where the reader will still find any little mistake. I wasn’t surprise at her title because its true but all drafts are shitty. I handwrite my essay, re-read then when i am satisfied of what i read and i corrected my mistakes that’s when i re-write my essay which will be my Final essay.

Fears and Cures

Fears:  I’m afraid of sharks and snakes. i don’t like the look of snakes and how they eyeball you like he wants to eat you. Don’t get me started on how he slither towards his food –  i am the food! – . Snakes have the audacity to climb on us but whats worse are the sharks – this is the reason why i don’t run towards the ocean when i am at the beach.  sharks attack with no hesitation. he smells fear but if there is a scratch.. BLOOD ! its over for me!i am done. this is the reason i am afraid of sharks and snakes. DO NOT GET MY STARTED ABOUT INSECTS!!!!!!!!

Cures: we are on a universe where we can escape our nightmares however when we close our eyes the nightmares are there. i refuse to go anywhere where there is snakes,sharks or even insects.

Without using the word “the”