This mashup feels like it has a circular movement because of the way all of the shapes are arranged, but I think it would have been nice to see what would happen if you had done more mirroring, reflecting, and/or flipping of your patterns. I don’t believe that messing around with your patterns like that would have damaged the rhythm and movement of your mashup, especially since your designs lend themselves very well to showing flow in the first place, as long as they’re oriented in the right directions, and could probably have shown off a better sense of cohesion that way.
This mashup feels like it has a circular movement because of the way all of the shapes are arranged, but I think it would have been nice to see what would happen if you had done more mirroring, reflecting, and/or flipping of your patterns. I don’t believe that messing around with your patterns like that would have damaged the rhythm and movement of your mashup, especially since your designs lend themselves very well to showing flow in the first place, as long as they’re oriented in the right directions, and could probably have shown off a better sense of cohesion that way.