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Genre (My Dream Company Biography)

Name       : Wael Nagy

Course     : ENG 1121, E106

Professor: Schmerler


Lockheed-Martin Biography.

Lockheed Martin is an American international company that works in deferent sectors such aerospace, defense, security and advanced technologies. Lockheed Martin is a result of combining of 2 companies, Lockheed Corporation and Martin Marietta. Lockheed Martin has a huge number off employee; based on 2018 statistics it has approximately 110,000 employees worldwide. 

Lockheed Martin considered among the largest companies in the world that work in these sectors. It has the largest defense contractor in the world in 2014.

Lockheed history starts a long time ago since 1926 when Lockheed establish his company as Aircraft Company, then a few years later john Northrop a chief Engineer join the company and developed a four-passenger monoplane, it was the first aircraft that succeed and achieved several records, this success was the start for Lockheed.

During the period of World War 2, Lockheed had a contract or association with the US government and had been starting to gain a good reputation not only in the USA but around the world.

In 1995 the big merge had been started between Lockheed Company and Martin Marita Corporation to be one company that is Lockheed Martin.




Internal Revision by Donald Murray

In the past decade the writing process was defined as three steps. 1) Prewriting 2) writing 3) rewriting but Murray change these three words to be 1) prevision 2) vision 3) revision.

Discovery meant to be inventive and have high imagination in writing, while Ignorance means almost the opposite meaning of Discovery

The process that Murray is talking about is the way in which we view the world, how we feel about it and how we convey that through language.  We also invent the world through our perception of it. While the product is a traditional approach, in which students are encouraged to mimic a model text.

Internal revision is everything writers do to discover and develop what they have to say, beginning with the reading of a completed first draft.  They read to discover where their content, form, language, and voice have led them…The audience is one person

External revision is what writers do to communicate what they have found to another audience…They eye their audience and may choose to appeal to it.  They read as an outsider.

The Receipt

Name       : Wael Nagy

Course     : ENG 1121, E106

Professor: Schmerler



Receipt of design a Gearbox



  • Computer
  • 3-d software like inventor
  • Information and knowledge of the design that being worked on.
  • Scientific Calculator
  • Book references for calculation formulas and equations.



You have to do deep research about the project that you going to design, define the possible material that you see it the best to use it based on the research that you did ( you have to define the material first, you will use the type of material in the calculations).

To guarantee the best design with less error, start in your design with consulting with your classmate, your professor, or with your coworker. Sometimes others see problems or things that the designer himself could not see it.

Defining Genre

  1. The 10 genres are youtube, Facebook, Instagram, tweeter, news, movies, music, reviews, story, reading, and documentary.
  2. I really like to watch documentary videos, I feel kind of calm when I watch it.
  3. My understanding of genre is could be type or kind of music, writing, movies.

Navigating Genres

When I write on Facebook I feel much less stress than when I write formal writing such an essay.

Sure, my parents can’t write or respond on the Facebook posts as I do, due to the age differentiation.

I feel more comfortable when I write on Facebook. The older people feel when they have a basic smartphone as they having over technology in their hands, so they can’t write comfortably as I do.

One example I liked from that the author mention is “Archaeological Dig Uncovers Ancient Race of Skeleton People” I see it funny because this is what the archaeologist should discover.

I am like most students don’t like to write, but I have no problem to write any kind of genre as long as  I gather information about it.

Shitty First Drafts

Actually, the chapter’s title attracted me to read the chapter fast to know what is it about. The way that the author described that she writes and most of the writers write to make it is easier for me to write if I follow her way and definitely I will. Usually, when I try to start to write I take a long time to decide to write the first word, but the way that she stated that to write whatever in your mind it hasn’t to be in order is a good approach to follow. For me personally, I write three or four drafts to come up with the final draft.

My Fear

I never felt fear before but when the time to finish school comes close I feel it.
I will feel bad if I didn’t find the work that I dream after I finish school, so from now I work hard and take a lot of courses besides the school classes.

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