Deficit

Noun

Definition: a deficiency or failing, especially in a neurological or psychological function.

The word was encountered in “The Natural Fix for A.D.H.D.” written by Richard A. Friedman. The author uses this word to explain what A.D.H.D abbreviates for, “Attention deficit hyperactivity disorder”.

I knew what A.D.H.D was, I just didn’t understand what deficit meant which is apart of defining the type of disorder it is. This word has other definitions but all surround the same definition of something “failing”

Definition

Article

 

Multihyphenate

Multihyphenate (noun)

Definition: someone who does several different jobs, especially in the entertainment industry.

”Wolfe outlines a philosophy that reflects his multihyphenate nature, blending the artistic approach of a photographer with the rigor of a lawyer.”

I understand this word now because the author, Chuck Wolfe has more than one job. He is a lawyer, photographer, writer and more. He works more then one job.

Encountered from Sisson, Patrick. “How better photos can help you document, and shape, your neighborhood

 

Class Notes: Project #4 and final exam prep

***Today I distributed the reading for Monday’s final exam. If you have not gotten it, please be in touch with me either in a comment on this post or by email.***

Think about how to succeed on an in-class essay exam. What will make you prepared? What do you need to avoid?

Preparing for the exam

  • annotate the article for the exam!
    • underline/highlight important information
    • write notes in the margins to help you find information
    • summary of each paragraph, difficult parts/main ideas in the margin
    • emphasize the main ideas in the margins–maybe paraphrase
    • define any words you’re unfamiliar with
    • passages you would want to quote if you accurately anticipated the questions
  • anticipate possible questions
    • write outlines for them
    • draft thesis statements
    • identify passages you would quote
  • reread the article!
    • and again!
  • be able to identify the main argument of the article
    • and main supporting points
  • Reread the sample questions to get comfortable with the instructions and the types of questions
  • Think about similar experiences or ideas from:
    • your life
    • other people’s lives
    • things you’ve read or watched
  • Be prepared
    • pack your bag with the reading, pens/pencils, eraser, etc
    • sleep!
    • eat breakfast/lunch
    • bringing a quiet, innocuous snack
    • be on time–leave yourself plenty of time
    • breathe

During the exam:

  • read the questions and instructions
    • usually, one is about the specific topic and one is broader
    • instructions: write approximately 5 paragraphs
    • decide on which one you want to answer
      • read both questions
      • reread article–or parts of it
      • think about which will be easier to write
      • devote some time to choosing
      • outline both?
  • Your written response:
    • approximately 5 paragraphs
    • not one long paragraph
    • one possible plan: 10 minutes to choose/plan; 50 min to write (roughly 10 min per paragraph); 15 min to review/edit. Be sure to begin with some planning!
    • name the article, author (full name the first time, last name afterwards), source, date
    • thesis statement in the first paragraph
    • examples: quotations from the reading; examples from your life/experience/things you’ve read or seen
    • introduction and conclusion
    • you can agree/disagree/little bit of both with the author
    • revising some errors in these sentences:
      • [In] the article “A Natural Fix for ADHD,” [the author] [Richard A Friedman] talks about the ups and downs of having ADHD.
      • In the article “A Natural Fix for ADHD,” by author Richard A. Friedman claims that altering someone’s environment can be a opportunity to recover from ADHD.
      • According to the article in paragraph 6 [the author] [Friedman] states “blah blah blah.”

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Some examples for the formal bits at the start of the business letters: Purdue OWL, UW-M Writing Lab, and UNC-Chapel Hill Writing Center

Here’s one sample of what the top of the letter could look like, using the block format (which I recommend) rather than the indented format (which I don’t recommend):

New York City College of Technology
300 Jay Street
Brooklyn, New York 11201

December 12, 2018

Artsy Pants, DFA
Curator
WordArt Gallery
123 Ink Street
Brooklyn, New York 11201

Dear Dr. Pants:

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FYLC “Our Stories” end-of-semester prompt: We drafted our responses in class on Wednesday. Please post these on the FYLC site (not on this site!) by Monday, 12/17.

 

Color Harmony: Phase 1

Monochromatic Skies, drawing by Rina mukamal

Analogous Blue And green oceans, Picture by Jennifer Levine

Complementary sky/ocean, Picture by Dave Johnson

The first photo is monochromatic because it’s showing the sky with one color which happens to be blue and it also shows different shades of blue. The second photo isn’t analogous because the photo includes two colors that happen to be near each other on the color spectrum/wheel. The last photo is complementary because it shows two complementary colors which happens to be blue and orange.

Value-added portraits: Phase 4

Phase 1

Phase 2

Phase 3

Overall this project was something new introduced to me and it also introduced me to the terms of saturation and grayscales colors. I never knew that the value of colors can be so indefinite. On the other hand I felt as if I could’ve done better in the paintings but all in all this project was a bit Moreno time consuming than it seemed but it was a good projects.

This project in total took me over 5 hours to do.

Color Harmony: Phase 1

This is Monochromatic By Olivier Degrace

You can see light and dark shades of blue

This is Analogous By Tanya Roberts

The blue is tuning into hot pink

This is Complementary By Mauro Moroni

the blue and orange are complementary colors

Disquiet

Definition: “To take away the peace or tranquility”.(Merriam-Webster definition).

Website: https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/disquiet

Founded: “Walk with Me” by David L. Ulin

Comprehend: When someone feels anxiety or worry, probably feeling unconfident, uncomfortable or unease.

Census

Noun

Definition: “An official enumeration of the population, with details as to age, sex, occupation, etc.” (Dictionary’s defenition). 

Website: https://www.dictionary.com/browse/census

Founded: “Here, Poverty and Privilege are Neighbors; Income Gaps are a Source of Resentment and Guilt” by Janny Scott.

Comprehend: To officially analyze or record the population.

Disparate

Adjective

Definition: “Markedly distinct in quality or character or containing or made up of fundamentally different and often incongruous elements”. (Merriam-Webster definition).

Website: https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/disparate

Founded: “Here, Poverty and Privilege are Neighbors; Income Gaps are a Source of Resentment and Guilt” by Janny Scott.

Comprehend: To diffiterate or to contrast others, something unsimilar or unlike.

Epidemic

Noun

Definition: “Affecting or tending to affect a disproportionately large number of individuals within a population, community, or region at the same time”  (Merriam-Webster definition).

Website: https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/epidemic

Founded: “A Natural Fix for A.D.H.D.” by Richard A. Friedman

Comprehend: Describes a virus that spread more than one organism, generally described as a plague or outbreak.