Homework due 10/1: Project #2 complete draft

In class on Thursday, 9/26, we agreed that everyone would post a complete draft of Project #2 by the end of the day on Tuesday. You should each:

  • write a post, using the category ENG 1101 Project #2 and the tag complete draft
  • include your complete draft in that post! That means it includes
    • your introductory paragraph (written in the voice of the interviewer)
    • the avatar question and your answer
    • the other 4 questions you’ve chosen and your answers
    • (it’s up to you how to order the 5 questions and answers)
    • images you want to include, in the same kind of way that our sample interview included images
  • After the Tuesday end-of-day deadline for posts, start commenting!
    • respond to at least 2 classmates
    • let them know what is working well, what seems unclear or incomplete, or any other ideas you have for their final revision
    • help classmates incorporate any new vocabulary you’ve learned in either ENG 1101 or COMD 1100 (or other COMD courses) if you see a way to fit it in!
  • Questions for me? Ask them here as a comment.

I’m really looking forward to reading these drafts! We’re almost done with Project #2!

Project #2

My avatar is based on one of the comic I’m currently reading. The comic is called “Popular Deskmate is a Cat”. I chose this avatar for a specific reason. The background color, it’s light purple with a bubbly effect which makes the background dreamy I guess. Also, the look on her face really caught my attention because I just like pictures that are sad-looking due to personal reasons. So originally in my profile picture the girl she does not have tears coming out of her eyes. I basically told my friend to draw her with tears coming out of her eyes since she’s already sad. Ever since my friend included the tears coming out of her face it became my profile picture for almost every social media I have.

 

My project #2

The avatar that I chose is an actual picture of me that I took on snapchat. The reason I picked this picture as my avatar is because I want to show others my real appearance as an actual person and also what there is to describe of me. I wear glasses you would probably believe that I’m smart in the avatar, I don’t smile like that either in pictures and also I always carry a necklace with my first name initial. I don’t like having my hair long so I keep it short around shoulder length. I like to add filter to pictures like the one on my avatar to look more creative with editing it.

My project #2

My avatar is based on a lime green background that says “keep it SIMPLE”. The fonts used was Helvetica for “keep it” that is then colored white.Then “SIMPLE” is an outline in white and copied again in a dark toned green which are then layered on top  of each other. “keep it” is positioned on top of  the”SIMPLE”. All together the texts was placed in the center and “SIMPLE” was enlarged to give the image a very minimalist yet creative design. Which I think represents economy and unity as well as  stable figure-ground. Ultimately I think this avatar represents me because I tend to enjoy the simple things in life. I also try to live my life to the motto”keep it simple” I think the most memorable things in design and life are the simplest ones.

Project #2 introduction

My avatar is a baby picture of me.  This baby picture is after one of my birthday. I don’t remember which one it was either after my first or after my second.  In this picture I am wearing an old white dress  and an all white hat.  The hat I am wearing is so big that it is covering all of my hair. There is a red background behind me with white polkadots. This picture appears that I’m very happy smiling with only like six teeth in my mouth, four on top and two on the bottom. 

ENG 1101 Homework: Drafting avatar descriptions

In class we started drafting the paragraph or two that will answer the Project #2 question about avatars. Here’s what the assignment asks you to do:

Choose or create an avatar to represent you on the OpenLab. You might need to reconsider your avatar choice if you’ve already selected and uploaded one. Write one or two paragraphs in which you describe the image well enough that your readers need not look at it to know what it looks like, call attention to specific details in the image, and explain how the image represents you, specifically the you you’re representing in the interview.

More simply, draft an answer to the question What is your avatar and how does it represent you?

Aim to write 200 words for the answer!

Homework following class on 9/19

As you continue working on the drafts of your interviews, spend time working on the question about your avatar: What is your avatar, and how does it represent you as a first-year design student?

To answer this question, review the three readings about avatars, and our class notes about the readings. Make sure you have an avatar and that it  meets the criteria in the readings and from our discussion and really does represent you.

A few things to keep in mind as you work:

Your avatar does not need to include an image of you!

This is a small square of visual information that you’re sharing with everyone. What can you include that takes advantage of that opportunity?

When you answer the first part of the question, “what is your avatar,” answer it in great detail. Imagine you’re explaining it for someone who can’t see it. Be that specific and careful as you write about it.

You can use images throughout Project #2, like the readings we encountered from the AIGA Eye on Design site. But your avatar is the only image you’re required to include. Think about how it represents all the aspects of yourself you’re writing about in the interview–if it doesn’t, either justify it in your writing, or choose a better fitting avatar.

You can add your response as a comment here.

Be sure to review the Nancy Sommers reading about revision–we’ll make a plan for our revisions in class on Tuesday.

Feel free to ask any questions here! Also, please comment back to at least two classmates to give them feedback about their answers or their avatar.

Homework following class on 9/17: Avatars

For homework, read the three articles/websites about avatars: “Professional protocol when choosing a Skype avatar“; Chad Renando, “An avatar analysis: Choosing your profile picture“; Michelle Venetucci Harvey. “Design avatars that make sense — and be more inclusive in the process.”

Choose an avatar that you want to use on the OpenLab, and add it to your profile. If you need help, you can refer to this page about adding an avatar from the OpenLab Help section.

Reflecting on that avatar, add as a comment to this post your answers to the questions below:

how does your avatar represent you as a design student with the interests, motivations, aspirations, etc you have written about?

If it doesn’t represent that version of you, you might change it.

Why is it important for it to represent you? Use examples from the readings to support your answer.

(Also, be sure to give credit to the creator of your avatar image, whether it was you or someone else! And be sure you have permission to do so!)

Homework due 9/17: Project #2 draft, and reading

Answer 4 questions from our list, trying to think about any kind of theme or awareness-raising your work expresses or you want it to express. Aim to write approximately 150 per question. To submit your homework, add a post with your 4 questions and answers, using the title Project #2 First Draft, category ENG1101 Project #2, the tag Drafts and anything else you choose to tag it.

Also, read Nancy Sommers’ “Revision Strategies of Student Writers and Esperienced Adult Writers.” Bring a copy to class, or let me know that you need a copy.

Project #2 drafting: interview questions

For homework, write a response to one of the interview questions we brainstormed in class. It can be one that your group came up with, or one from someone else. It can be the one you started drafting in class or another. Aim to write approximately 150 words in your answer.

Comment on at least 2 classmates’ responses. Your comment can be directed to them, or it can be more for everyone to address why it’s important for that question to be included in the interview, or connections you’re starting to see across the responses.