Things I should try to do when revising my draft…
1. State a good thesis
2. Not have repetitive sentences and be straight to the point.
3. Have an interesting introduction to catch the readers attention and be wanting to read more.
Prof Jacquelyn Blain
Things I should try to do when revising my draft…
1. State a good thesis
2. Not have repetitive sentences and be straight to the point.
3. Have an interesting introduction to catch the readers attention and be wanting to read more.