Revised essays

The reason of choosing this topic is I want to be an entrepreneur and I feel that it gives an opportunity to invest my time to do something what I love to do. My assumptions about this was it’s an online based business which just require internet but it also requires  to build up a network of communication with customers.

Online businesses are getting popular day by day as it is easy to start an online business than start a business. It also gives opportunity to everyone to start it whenever and wherever they live. For example- most of the makeup companies are also based mostly online nowadays, as it is easy to purchase makeup online by following few steps. According to Forbes magazine, Kylie Jenner is the youngest billionaire of 2019. The reason behind her success mostly depends on online business which is based on makeup that featured her name. According to Kylie , she started to get more customers just to promote her business online like Snapchat, Instagram.In rural areas you can startup an online business and reach anyone around the world. Even in developing countries like Bangladesh, most of young women and housewives are involving in online business via Facebook and selling cosmetics,makeups,dresses and also involving in free lancing, web development and earning some extra money. Also women entrepreneurs  are getting recognized and starting selling their creative products either an art, home decor via online. For example-Etsy become very well recognized websites for selling and buying creative products .

The more I investigated about online business I find out it is a business based on building a network by using modern devices like laptop,mobile, iPad, desktops and also an easy way to earn money without working for long hours and less difficult circumstances.

The thing that surprised me is how online business is having huge impact on women entrepreneurs and young boy and girl and influencing them to involve in it. My opinion about the topic is same but I still have some questions like how to improve the communication with potential customers and how to improve business just to cope up with other business competitors. After learning about online business it has a very good impact on me that in future it will open up thousand more opportunities for our new generation.

The thing I did for revision is I check my spell mistake by autocorrect and also grammar mistakes by using an app Grammarly . And also I tried to be specific about my audience and put my report in a correct sequential order as I was advised to do so and also write my opinion and analysis.

work cited-

  • Robehmed, Natalie. “How 20-year-old Kylie Jenner built a $900 million fortune in less than 3 years.”Daily Cover Forbes, 11 July 2018,

https://www.forbes.com/sites/forbesdigitalcovers/2018/07/11/how-20-year-old-kylie-jenner-built-a-900-million-fortune-in-less-than-3-years/#1bfd4db3aa62 

  • Edmondson, Brian. “5 online businesses you can start with no money.” The balance small business, 0 4 March 2019,

https://www.thebalancesmb.com/start-online-business-with-no-money-4128823

  • Islam, Zahidul, Mohammad .”Women triumph in e-commerce.” The Daily Star, 08 March 2018,

https://www.thedailystar.net/business/women-triumph-e-commerce-1545139

 

A letter to you !

Dear professor,

Before joining this class and learning about writer’s block, literacy sponsors, bad ideas about writing,  I didn’t know how to start writing and how to do brainstorming and how to express myself. I often fail to catch reader’s attention. However,My writing was meaningless and full of incorrect words.

As an immigrant to USA, I had no idea about specific rules of writing. By taking this class with you, It helps me to understand that writing should be simple, accurate and grammatically correct to catch reader’s attention .

Throughout the whole semester learning about genres helps me to choose a topic, knowing about googlepedia helps me to do brainstorming and writer’s block helps me to find out what is blocking me to write is limited vocabulary. I should increase my knowledge of vocabularies and  make my writing interesting to hold reader’s attention and also need to work on my grammar. I have to practice a lot on my writing and there are lot of things I need to adopt and learn eventually. I believe there is no limit of learning so I’ll keep learning throughout my whole life.

Moreover,The memories of this writing class is a wonderful journey with you. At the end, I realize that how beautifully you change the way of my writing and help me to discover myself as a writer. You put stairs for us to reach the main goal of this class which is essay writing and truly in future it will help me a lot as a base of my professional writing.

sincerely

Nazwa Munia

Remix project

Online business can be a good platform and all kind of people can be benefitted from this But specifically young girl or boy who is trying to get some extra pocket money to maintain  their regular expenses  and also the women who stay at home parent and house wife. I did research about online business and gather ideas that can give them a new starting point which can lead to a career. To build a career in online business they need to know how to use internet and how to build an website to attracts buyers and also need to know how to use social media apps for example- Facebook, Twitter, Instagram etc because these apps helps to promote online business and helps to grow. They can also make some YouTube videos to promote their online business. Because advertisement is the expansion is the main motto of success Incase of online business. I want them to know this information by reading some magazines like People magazine,The New Yorker,Vogue, forbes and also they should watch some videos in YouTube. The reason behind choosing it ,these are easily available and accessible for the people and also it gives a better knowledge about it. I think the best way to catch their attention is social media apps, videos and images because people are more influenced by what they see and read.

Artist’s statement

My audience would be everyone but specifically young boy and girl, women entrepreneurs ,because online business will give them the opportunity to fulfill their unfulfilled dream of working their own and get their own identity as an entrepreneur.For my remix I chose women entrepreneurs and young girl and boy because they can use online business platform to enhance their inner creativity and represent them to the world and they can also helps to spread the importance of online business. I choose magazines,articles ,YouTube videos ,Facebook , because these are the fuel of online business. I know this will work best for my audience because online business based on promotion,the more good reviews you get and the more people know about the business and the more buyer you get. The problem I face doing this is people can easily copy your ideas because using the social media’s as a source which is open to everyone and anyone can see it and people can easily duplicate your ideas for their beneficiaries. If I can use some extra secured platform to promote and share the ideas except these social media’s it would have been way better.

Online business

Online business can be a good platform and all kind of people can be benefitted from this But specifically young girl or boy who is trying to get some extra pocket money to maintain  their regular expenses  and also the women who stay at home parent and house wife. It can give them a new starting point which can lead to a career. To build a career in online business they need to know how to use internet and how to build an website to attracts buyers and also need to know how to use social media apps for example- Facebook, Twitter, Instagram etc because these apps helps to promote online business and helps to grow. They can also make some YouTube videos to promote their online business. Because advertisement is the expansion is the main motto of success Incase of online business. I want them to know this information by reading some magazines like People magazine,The New Yorker,Vogue, Vanity fair, Teen vogue and also they should watch some videos in YouTube. The reason behind choosing it are these are easily available and accessible for the people and also it gives a better knowledge about it. I want all the young creative people and women who are trying to start a career but due to lack of having proper support or investment, they couldn’t do it before but now they can start their own career without thinking twice.

Online business

Online business  has enabled entrepreneurs to do their work from almost everywhere in the world by using modern technologies such as computer, phone, iPad, etc. In fact, it gives the opportunity to all the entrepreneurs to work all over the world and give proper freedom to express their inner talents. Creating an online business is all about increasing your network of communication with your potential buyers.

What is an online business? How does it work? How to earn money? How to start it? Is there any course or degree needed to achieve to do online business? All of these questions should come across anyone’s mind before starting an online business. Online business is a business based on building a network via modern devices and a very easy way to earn money without working for long hours and under no difficult circumstances  to prove yourself. Online businesses are getting popular day by day. As it is easy to start an online business than start business and also gives opportunity to everyone to start it whenever wherever they live. Nowadays it’s getting popular and fast-growing profession in the world. Online business has a huge impact on makeup industry. For example, most of the makeup companies  are also based on mostly online nowadays, as it is easy to purchase makeup by following a few steps via online. It helps both customers and sellers and also makes the job easy for both of them. That’s why if you investigate about the success of  all the young billionaire’s they will give most of the credit to the Internet and how this help them to grow in such a short time. According to Forbes magazine, Kylie Jenner is the youngest billionaire of 2019 . The reason of her successful life mostly depends on online business which is based on makeup that featured by her name. According to Kylie, she started to get more customers just to promote her business through some social medias like Snapchat, Instagram.

https://www.forbes.com/sites/forbesdigitalcovers/2018/07/11/how-20-year-old-kylie-jenner-built-a-900-million-fortune-in-less-than-3-years/#1bfd4db3aa62

So moreover online business gives the opportunity to all type of people around the world that you can start your business without having a big slot of cash investment and can grow such a short period of time. And it gives you the freedom of choosing your own work hours and also helps you to grow faster than any other business.

https://www.thebalancesmb.com/start-online-business-with-no-money-4128823

Online business are bringing a huge change in business industries and mostly the young generations are getting interested to start one. In rural areas you can start up an online business and reach to anyone around the world and earn money. Even developing countries like Bangladesh, most of the young women and housewives are doing online business via Facebook and selling cosmetics, dresses, makeup and doing freelancing ,web development and earning some extra money. According to the daily star female entrepreneurs are increasing in numbers in Bangladesh and they are more prone to online business.

https://www.thedailystar.net/women-entrepreneurs-get-new-e-commerce-service-28676

Creative people are getting recognized and starting selling their creative work either an art, or any creative homemade product via online. For example-Etsy become very renowned and well recognized websites for selling and buying creative products via online. And it’s giving opportunities to all the creative people an way to earn money at home by selling the products which they love to create and on the other hand people who love to buy some unique products they prefer buying from Etsy as well. That’s how online businesses are getting popular in new generation.

https://www.nytimes.com/2013/11/12/opinion/etsys-industrial-revolution.html

On the other hands,Freelancing  or web development are growing so fast and give people more opportunities to work and help to prevent unemployment.

Bibliography

  • Robehmed, Natalie. “How 20-year-old Kylie Jenner built a $900 million fortune in less than 3 years.”Daily Cover Forbes, 11 July 2018,

https://www.forbes.com/sites/forbesdigitalcovers/2018/07/11/how-20-year-old-kylie-jenner-built-a-900-million-fortune-in-less-than-3-years/#1bfd4db3aa62 

  • Edmondson, Brian. “5 online businesses you can start with no money.” The balance small business, 0 4 March 2019,

https://www.thebalancesmb.com/start-online-business-with-no-money-4128823

  • Islam, Zahidul, Mohammad .”Women triumph in e-commerce.” The Daily Star, 08 March 2018,

https://www.thedailystar.net/business/women-triumph-e-commerce-1545139

 

Writer’s statement

The ideas of discourse communities, genres and rhetoric make sense to me and it is very useful concept as well. As by learning discourse communities, we came to learn about diversities of different cultural People and different society. Discourse communities helps you to introduce yourself with different environment and culture and teach to adopt it for a better future. On the other hand genres is a part of our life and from early childhood, we are very acquainted with different types of genres and till now the genre is a big part in our life. Within the evaluation of time genres changes but still plays an important role in our daily life. In school, I learned about a lot of genres which I didn’t think before but now I know that genres are also very important for writer. Finally, rhetoric is persuasion of speaking and writing. It makes the statement and speech more meaningful and technically well organized and give a shape to the writing. So all of these discourse communities, genres and rhetoric is very important for a writer to enhance their writing skill . If any one of these missing in our life then writing would not be that meaningful and oriented .

Writer’s statement

The ideas of discourse communities, genres and rhetoric make sense to me and it is very useful concept as well. As by learning discourse communities, we came to learn about diversities of different cultural People and different society. Discourse communities helps you to introduce yourself with different environment and culture and teach to adopt it for a better future. On the other hand genres is a part of our life and from early childhood, we are very acquainted with different types of genres and till now the genre is a big part in our life. Within the evaluation of time genres changes but still plays an important role in our daily life. In school, I learned about a lot of genres which I didn’t think before but now I know that genres are also very important for writer. Finally, rhetoric is persuasion of speaking and writing. It makes the statement and speech more meaningful and technically well organized and give a shape to the writing. So all of these discourse communities, genres and rhetoric is very important for a writer to enhance their writing skill . If any one of these missing in our life then writing would not be that meaningful and oriented .

Which ideas do you like?

The idea that I like most is social media like Facebook, Instagram, snap chat. Because these are the medium via which we are now connected to the world and it made our life very easy and comfortable that world become very small and close to us. Anything happening to any corner of the world either good or bad you will be able to know about it while you are sitting at home and also you can communicate with your friends and family who lives in abroad, it’s quite impossible to meet them every day or in a month. But we can communicate with them in a regular day basis via these social media. Even our daily life needs can also be fulfilled through this medium. Finally, Life wouldn’t be this easy without the help of these social media apps.