Reflection and revision

Things I should do for making my draft better are

Making the essay more reasonable.
Fixing some sequences to improve the unity and deleting redundant words.
Enhancing my ideas to catch the readers.

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The OpenLab at City Tech:A place to learn, work, and share

The OpenLab is an open-source, digital platform designed to support teaching and learning at City Tech (New York City College of Technology), and to promote student and faculty engagement in the intellectual and social life of the college community.