Monthly Archives: October 2014

Overlapping New Yorks (Refelction)

This is the second project we have done so far. The idea of project two is to help us view New York differently. While I spending my time walking around City Tech, I have discovered the city differently than before. We can apply Colson Whitehead’s idea in “City Limits” to help us have better understanding skill while we walking through location we have chosen. Overlapping is happening every single day in New York, and that cause numerous juxtaposition in the city if we are willing to observe.

Juxtapositions in the city intensively carrying out two different styles between old and new. While we are living in New York, we didn’t expect to see there are still old classical revival style buildings in the ordinary street. With my experience, project two helped me to know around City Tech’s location but also with meaningful idea that applied to Whitehead’s idea. We can always see these old buildings differently if we can observe them from a different perspective.

Project#2 Reflection (Mash-up displays)

This project introduced me to an unfamiliar concept that an individual can display the sound of music onto paper. First, we did a class demo where we listened to two different kinds of music. The first was Stegato which is a more loud and rough course music track. The next was Legato which is more monotone and flows more calmly. We then translated what we heard onto Bristol paper in the form of shapes and lines that would depict whether it was stegato or legato. When we created the mash-ups of these pieces, I was able to explore this concept into more depth which allowed me to get creative. Throughout each stage of this project, I felt that there was a significant connection that helped us to gradually understand music more, in a different way. There were aspects f the projects I think I could of done differently such as the inking mash-up. My edges could of been a little more smooth as I was told in the critique. The feedback that I received can only be used to help in my work in the future. Now that I know the specific things I can work on, I can display major improvement for the following projects.

Overlapping New Yorks (Final)

Everyone will come out with their own version of place instead the place that they normally see. New York is one of the biggest and busiest city in the world. However, New York is changing dramatically in every single day. While we are being busy for living, the city is being overlapping. Different people will have different feeling while they comparing their version of New York to the “New” New York. We can easily find the juxtaposition between “Old” New York and “New” New York while we looking through from time and experience. Time and experience helping us to build our version of New York, and the version that exists in our brain is considered as memory. We should always remember our version of New York, because that is the version that sticking with us while the time is lapsing.

New York is a place that keeps giving people a concept of being modern and new. However, every city requires time to develop itself to become more modern and new. While I walking through around City Tech, a street name Fulton Street immediately captures my eyes because it is the perfect example of juxtaposition and overlapping. In my observation, most of the buildings in the street have four-story tall, have different style of windows, different shape of curves and different colors. These buildings will give a different view of New York if we just look them directly. However, we are unable to see all these buildings directly because most of the buildings have different sign on them, such as Footlocker, Polo, GameStop, etc. In addition, some of buildings have giant posters that representing the store is modern and commercial. The idea of these signs is the way of transforming these buildings into overlapping, because these all classical historical old buildings are being transforming into a modern fancy way to present. Furthermore, while I continue the walking, I can see there is also have new construction technology buildings with twenty to thirty-story tall, numerous small square windows, and a modern style of design with steel that can reflect light. Comparing to the fading brick, different styles of the windows, and with eighteen or nineteen century’s classic style of the old buildings, these new buildings immediately stand out and give a sense of being new, modern, and professional. We can easily find these juxtaposition while using our first-hand experience to observe these two different styles buildings because these buildings are making a huge contrast to help us view New York differently and building our version of New York. We did not know when these old classical historical buildings will be ignored and forgot their own style while comparing to the new modern buildings. Fortunately, we are still able to see them before completely transforming into commercial buildings.

With my experiencing, while I continue walking through the area around Fulton Street, I have discovered a very special old classical historical building, and the building is call “The Dime Saving Bank of Brooklyn”. In addition, I continue discovering behind this bank, some workers are constructing a new building for “Chase Bank”. I believe this the symbol of that representing overlapping and juxtaposition. This place is being replaced by a new modern building, but also carrying out a different style while we comparing of old and new. The signs of “Chase Bank’ already label on the Dime Bank building. What is the feeling of the old people who live together with Dime Bank building for almost a century? As I do my research on the Dime Bank building, I realize Dime Bank building is becoming an asset to Chase Bank in 2008 after the Washington Mutual failed. In addition, the Dime Bank building was built in the 1906 with the classical revival style. Dime Bank is already existing for over a century and being overlapped while Chase Bank is constructing a new building behind it. As I mentioned, I predict the new Chase Bank building will be also modern, tall, and professional. What is the feeling of us and old people while we looking this juxtaposition and overlap while comparing the Dime Bank building and the Chase Bank building? The commercial style is exist in the twenty-first century, and that will wipe out all the classical historical buildings. No matter how these old buildings still remain their appearances, their original style is already gone. In Colson Whitehead’s, “City Limits” he said that “I never got a chance to say goodbye to some of my old buildings” because he is watching these old buildings are transforming into more commercial and forgotten. No one will be able to remember it is a Dime Bank that was built in the 1906, people will only remember it is a Dime Bank building that is part of Chase Bank’s assets. The next generation will be born with this kind of concept, and no one will be able to inherit the memory from the Dime Bank. Unfortunately, we are unable to change this rule, because it is the nature that we all have to accept.

In the end, Whitehead said “Our old building still stand because we saw them, moved in and out of their long shadows, were lucky enough to know them for a time” which telling us we should accept overlapping, because this reason that make our version of New York becoming more significant and meaningful to us. We should always feel thankful that we are lucky seeing the old buildings existing in our version of New York. While we are watching New York is changing rapidly, we can still smile because at the same time, New York is watching us growing and ageing. With the comparison of the new modern buildings, the old classical buildings can also easily capture our eye if we are willing to leave our footprint on these buildings. The next generation may not inherit our memory or our idea, but they can find our footprint to feel their first-hand experience by themselves. There is always a new outcome of feeling while we following a different people’s footprint in a different century.

Project#2 Reflection

For project 2, my juxtapositions consists of two different structures that are from two different times of New York. In the picture that was posted, you see an old church building to the right of the shot on Remsen street. In the far distance you will spot a tall silver skyscraper with hundreds of floors. As I stated in my project, this overlap was discovered by an accident. I was simply watching my back and looking up the block. I learned many things from my work in this project. For one, I was able to become more familiar with the environment around City Tech. I wouldn’t normally take a grand tour of the area on my own unless I were to get lost first. However, this project prevented major confusion while at the same time learning more about the city that I am from. I learned that as a writer, I have much improved in conveying my message to readers. With new vocabulary, I can apply greater detail for readers to understand and even imagine for themselves. I understood concepts that Whitehead wanted to convey such as the fact that every individuals New York is different. This means one citizen may  remember city one way, while someone else may be accustomed to an older version of the same city. They may not want to except that things have changed New York will never stop moving forward.

The completion of this project required a significant amount of time for me to complete the task. I spent approximately 2-3 hours a day planning out and refining my work so that it can pinpoint the questions that were asked. From this experience I realized the importance of spending time on your work. The more time and effort dedicated to the work, the greater the quality and depth it will be. For the next project, I will have to put even more time into my work, as if it is something for an interview. And if I don’t think the grade I receive is acceptable for me, I won’t hesitate to go back and correct it.

 

Ombudsmen

Ombudsmen - Noun

Definition: a government official who hears and investigates complaints by private citizens against other officials or government agencies.

Source: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/ombudsmen?s=t

Encounter: I encountered this word when I reading “The Boston Photographs”.

Understand: The word ombudsmen is appearing in Nora Ephron’s scribble “The Boston Photographs“. The word is using differently while the Ephron said “For the last five years, the Washington Post has employed various journalists as ombudsmen, whose job is to monitor the paper on behalf of the public” which is a different meaning from the definition of ombudsmen. The definition of ombudsmen is referring to government officials, however, ombudsmen in the quote that is referring to a person (not government official) who will monitor the behalf of the public. In that sentence, I can see the word ombudsmen can be referred to two different types of people.

Project #2: Final

Everyone has their own New York. Each persons New York is different with their perspective and memories. By taking a walk in New York you’re bypassing someones New York. One persons New York might be the busy city with all of the crowds. Another persons might be a more calm area. Each New Yorker has their own perspective of New York. I took a walk to Court Street and discovered a juxtaposition of two different New Yorks. Everyone has their own New York which is different.

The first New York I saw on Court Street was right where the government buildings are, one of them was for the Supreme Court. The area was right by Colombus Park where the fountain is placed. What I noticed that was unique to this New York was that it had a lot of security, being that there are government buildings there. There were also many professionally dressed people. Those people most likely being lawyers or anyone who works in those government buildings. The New York I was viewing was most likely a part of their New York. The area seemed to have little to no construction going on. The buildings there, at the glance that I remember, seemed to be there for several years. I wouldn’t think that they’ve been under construction anytime recently. But you never know when an building is going to go away and change. You never know when your New York will no longer be the same for anyone new to the area. Even if a building seems to be permanent in its area, that can always change. As Colson Whitehead explains in his piece of City Limits, we never know when we’re going to be seeing a building for the last time. A place can go out of business or under construction without us having a clue that it was going to happen. Whatever it turns into is also someone elses own unique New York. For the time and day that I went the area was also not crowded. There were people taking pictures and just sitting on the steps in front of one of the buildings. I assume seeing that happening is a daily thing for those whose New York this is. This all describes the New York of one or more people, but everyone is different. Not everyone has the same New York.

The other New York that I saw was when I walked a little more down from my last location near the government buildings. Court Street splits farther down on one side and it goes into Joralemon Street on the other side. I walked further down Court Street where the Borough Hall station is. I immediately thought that this area resembles more of a busy city rather than what I just saw. The area specifically reminded me of Manhattan, with all of the stores and buildings to shop at. There was also a building that had a screen on it playing a video which really reminded me of Manhattan. This area would be more of the commercial side. This New York would probably belong to someone who walks through it everyday or lives near by, and has gotten to know the overall area. I walked down Court Street smelling food, which was different from the other area with the government buildings. This area of Court Street had more construction. That also caused this area to be much louder with jack hammers and various other construction sounds. I could tell and see that there were many buildings being rebuilt and some stores changing. That made me think that this is more than one New York here for people. Some people might remember all of the stores that used to be in the area, maybe the StarBucks right by the subway station used to be a completely different building or store. In one persons New York there’s a StarBucks there, in another persons there was another store there before. Both those people have their own different New York because New York is constantly changing. Once again in Colson Whitehead’s City Limits, he talks about still calling the Met Life building the Pan Am Building because that’s what it was when he got to New York. To someone else who’s newer, it’s the Met Life building. That’s also two different New Yorks and shows that New York has constant change going on. But it’s also not always changing in every area, like the government side that I saw. Change in New York is a cause of many people having their own New York. Everyone being at a different spot in New York at a different time causes us to have different memories and sites.

Although those two New Yorks have many differences, they also have a couple of similarities. Much less than the differences being that every persons New York is different, not completely the same. One similarity between the two would be the obvious fact that they’re both in Downtown Brooklyn. Even being in the same area, they still make up different New Yorks. Although the buildings are newer on the commercial side rather than the government side, on both sides I noticed that the buildings have similar heights. There honestly were not many similarities, and I’m not surprised by that. Being that I recognized the two areas of Court Street as different New Yorks, they’re bound to be more different. Also going back to saying that everyone has their own New York, of course the two areas wouldn’t be very similar to each other.

Each person lives in a different part of New York. Each of us has our own unique New York, whether it be from out memories making up what it is, or the area in general being unique. New York constantly has new people moving in and out and buildings coming and going. This all contributes to the unique New York of each person. I was able to see two different New Yorks on my walk in Court Street. One may be for lawyers working in government buildings, the other may be for people who possibly live around the area, go to school there, or work nearby. Even though those are two different New Yorks, everyone has their own memories that make it unique to them. Everyone has their own New York.

 

Works Cited: Whitehead, Colson. “City Limits.” The Colossus of New York

 

Camera Lucida

Looking at the picture on p 22:

  • soldiers, guns, namely assault rifles->war
  • (Nicaragua)
  • rubble, aftermath ->destruction, depression
  • nuns
  • small village
  • trees
  • cloud?
  • ground, road
  • sandbags? = fortification
  • pile of bricks
  • pole–street light? telephone pole?
  • dictatorship?
  • why are there soldiers with heavy artillery next to the nuns?

http://monoskop.org/images/c/c5/Barthes_Roland_Camera_Lucida_Reflections_on_Photography.pdf

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Project #2 Reflections

Now that you have completed Project #2 for ENG 1101, write a post on your Learning Blog about about what you have written. In your post, write a one-paragraph summary of your project. Next, reflect on what you learned by working on this project–this can be about the area around City Tech, about your specific topic, about yourself as a writer, about the ideas of overlapping New Yorks that Whitehead introduced us to. Be specific. Then, reflect on what you wrote: what are you most proud of, and what do you think still needs work? In terms of the process of working on this project, what was helpful, and what additional support did you wish you had? Finally, estimate how much time you spent on the project, how you spent that time, and what knowledge you take from this experience about your writing habits and time management into your next project.

Choose the categories ENG1101 Project #2 and the tag Reflections, plus any other tags you find appropriate.

Project #2 was due at the start of class on Monday, 10/20. Your reflection is due by Tuesday, 10/21, at 10:00am.

Project 2 Final

What is a city? In my opinion, the city is the place that contains multiple areas, such as political areas, residential areas, financial centers and etc. New York city is the place like this.  To know more about this fantastic city, I take a walk around our campus. At very beginning, I felt like only Manhattan can represent New York City because the first impression he gave me was sleepless, amazing, ambition, but far away. When I close to this city, I realize that New York City not only has a shiny surface, but also has a lovely and busy place called Brooklyn.

As I taking a walk, I was thinking about the juxtaposition. Where can be the best place to represent juxtaposition? This took a long time for me to make a decision because every place has its mission to stand on his way.  I’ve walked several place from our campus to the Brooklyn Bridge Park, even further the Brooklyn Bridge. However, on a morning when I passed by the supreme and family court, I found my answer finally.

My positions are located between Brooklyn Bridge Park and the Supreme and Family court. Brooklyn Bridge Park, a place that people would like to share happiness with family and friends where locates under the Brooklyn Bridge. Sitting on the stone beach, I’ve viewed the great scene of Manhattan Island. It was not that big as today. With the development of the society, the park extends with those piers. Back to the park, I had a really relax the afternoon at the park. Everyone enjoyed their coffee or their afternoon-topic. The Sun shines on the river brilliantly. People seat on benches or play near the river. Such a relaxed picture.

Usually, I pass by the Supreme and family court is on my way school or home. Maybe because of the rush hour in the morning, people stand outside of the court always look like seriously. Obviously, court house is a serious place, but compares with Brooklyn Bridge Park where just locates 10 blocks away, the atmosphere is totally different. At the family court people usually worried about support or their children belong to, not share their happiness which is sad. The sun like a fire shines on them with abandonment.  They fan their folders, open their mouths with helpless and anxious. They have stories that cannot tell.

However, not everyone from court house hates the city,  still have a happy ending for some family. They went out of the lobby with smile and hug, like the people who seat on benches at Brooklyn Bridge Park or enjoy the Sun.

Colson Whitehead, the writer of ‘City Limits’in the book, he found out New York City is different by feeling it. I cannot oppose his opinion that  we could feel the city because we are in it.  The city can go on without us, but that city doesn’t belong to us, doesn’t it? At the same time, same place, but different events are happening which are building your own New York City.

Brooklyn Bridge Park
Brooklyn Bridge Park

Eng1101 project #2: Final

We live in New York one of the greatest cities in the world. We have Broadway, the Empire State building, Madison Square Garden and much more. There’s also crowded side walks, packed buses, subways and elevators you can’t walk down the block without smelling exhaust fumes. That’s one example of the multiple New Yorks Colson Whitehead talks about in “City Limits” it’s a New York we’ve all seen and experienced. So what’s the overlapping New York? Throughout all the madness we encounter in the concrete jungle there are peaceful places we can relax and catch our breath. One of those places is a park. A little bit of nature to counter the industrial. A calm and serene New York we can go to to get away from the chaotic one that is my juxtaposition.

Now my walk around City Tech didn’t take long and it wasn’t very far. To be honest I was tired from class and was just looking for someplace I could sit down and relax. First place I went to was Columbus park. It’s right around the corner from City Tech and besides I pass by it every day on my way to class so why not check it out right. Though it is called a park I didn’t get that easy going relaxing atmosphere I was looking for. So I kept on walking and found myself in Metro Tech Center while looking for some place to eat. It was pretty nice so I decided to stay a while relax. It was a really nice place somewhere you could sit down and unwind. There were plenty of people; joggers people from other near by colleges all just hanging out. They had these lawn chairs on a rocky, gravel like lawn. You could smell food from nearby fast food joints like five guys. You could hear and see the pigeons as they landed near your feet. You could also hear the sound of dogs barking as they were being walked by their owners. Even though it’s in the middle of a shopping center it still felt like a nice place to just go and chill out.

In comparison to the plaza we have the busy Jay st. located directly in front of it. Walking up Jay street you’ll probably see a few things. Cars pulling in and out of parking lots. All different kinds of people walking around. Some people in suites on their way to the court house. People on their way to or from class. People walking to their job or having a smoke. Some getting out of the train station. It’s just like any other street in New York you could probably see all the same things in Manhattan. This is the chaotic New York we’re all used to. Always got somewhere to be something to do not time to take it easy or smell the roses just going on with our seemingly endless list of to-dos. Granted we’re New Yorkers we live this everyday we’ve grown an immunity to it all. Even still sometimes we need a break of all the constant moving we do.

The juxtaposition of these two places is simply amazing. For instance you could have a guy who got out of class late who’s running to the subway to catch his train so he can make his way to work and just a few feet away from him you have some old friends sitting on a bench and catching up with each other and just enjoying the beautiful day. This example isn’t limited to Metro Tech Center. After you take a walk through Central Park and it’s seemingly vast ocean of trees and you step out into the street; your view changes from green grass to yellow taxis. People lounging around enjoying the day are replaced with executives on their way to a business meeting. I know comparing a tiny little plaza to the vast Central Park is a bit of a stretch but they both serve the same purpose; an island in a constantly moving see of people. The calm eye in the center of the storm that is daily life.

In Colson Whiteheads “City Limits” he talks about people “haunting the streets of his or her own New York”. Keeping that in mind I can’t help but wondering what used to be there before. Maybe an actual park used to be there and then they built the plaza on top of it. What stores used to be on Jay street before. How many people actually know what used to be there or even remember what was there. Who lost a part of their New York and how many new ones were formed? It really makes me curious. Who knows maybe in simpler times there were more places to catch your breath, maybe there has been and always will be on the go.

In all honesty not everyone has same the time to go out to the park or like to go. Maybe some people don’t like the outdoors or don’t have the time in their schedule, but we all have some place we go to at the end of the day we’re we catch our breath. Maybe it’s your bedroom, your backyard or porch swing ,but we all have some place in this concrete jungle were we can feel at ease. Everyone’s New York should have “park” a place where you’re at peace and away from the hectic day to day.

Work Cited:

Whitehead,Colson.  “City Limits”. The Colossus of New York