Revised portrait of a writer

Short explanation:

During my revision, I went over making sure I corrected any spelling and grammar as well as transition words. I also made sure I went back and used any examples that could amplify my work so it could be understood better and the reader had a sense of what I was trying to convey through my writing. With this my edited work has improved through perspective and better understanding.

 

NEW VERSION:

Portrait of a writer Unit 1

Writing to me has been a chore and always a “Ugh” moment, but I’ve changed a bit. A chore that ruined my mood as I stared at an empty page looking for inspiration. But throughout this class and the past couple months writing has grown on me, giving me a sense of expression. Still hard, but I actually try to write my thoughts in writing and it gives me a sense of completion and triumph  when I write something, it makes me feel very proud about it. Nevertheless, I still get writers block like any other person, but after that obstacle the pen never leaves the paper. I’m still shy about writing and showing people, as I’m not good at writing, even though I like to think I am like anyone else. I like the flow of good writers and the way is just all makes sense. Sentences don’t sound chunky or too long, Introductions and transitions are seamless. For me it feels like a set of bullet points, and is sounds like “Blah, Blah, Blah, dot”. And so on. That’s what I’m trying to fix but recently my ability to be able to know what I want to write about has been helping me with that problem. I don’t see myself thinking for 5 minutes after each sentence I write in fear that it all going to fall apart in any second. Instead I think of the topic and start writing whatever comes to my mind and edit it afterwards . This is helpful because I feel accomplished for actually writing and putting effort into something especially during the editing process gets easier and easier every writing session I have.

 

I also like poetry, and the way the simple poems rhyme and make me smile. I find myself always wanting to read more. My attempts at writing are about the people that matter to me or how I feel. Writing still is new to me though, I am more of a science and math type of person and yet now I find myself  in the moment when I start to slow down and don’t know what to say. This is why writing is frustrating in many cases, because it makes me feel dumb. “Really? You can’t write an essay about yourself?”. Those are the thoughts that run through my head when I’m writing, and then soon catastrophe of sloppiness and rushed words start to kick in. But not in this essay. In all honesty, Writing is a hobby that I try to practice in and always see myself falling out, but I am inspired by some of my literary sponsors I have. Some of them include my favorite teacher and My girlfriend, both of which very good at writing and have wonderful pieces of writing that I frankly read when I’m bored because they are so amazing to me. As a writer I would give myself a 6/10, I fallout and give up sometimes, but I still have the motivation to try over and over again. I like writing but it’s unfortunately not my forte.

 

“Let Me Be Frank With You”

Dear Professor,

Now let me start by saying this. I love writing. Am I good at it? No. Do I try? Yes. But writing have always been and still is a love-hate relationship. Going into your class, I had an understanding of writing essays and formats and the mumbo jumbo. All the clear cut “Intro. Body. Conclusion” essays that I had to make every other week like a machine. It really tarnished my love for writing. So the look on my face when you told me to forget all of that in the first day of class, was priceless. I felt free whereas the open lab posts helped get me back into the discipline of writing regularly, but in a way that I’ve never done before.

I would say the biggest opinion that changed about writing would be the literary sponsors. It was really confusing at first, yet it helped me reflect back to my old high school teacher.It made me reach out to her and it finally made me understand the meaning of literary sponsors and how they impact the writer. To be honest, writing that essay was really dreary, to be frank most of the assignments didn’t spark my interest. However, this assignment really did help me clear my hardwired mentality on formatting and how not every single piece of writing has to be in a “1. 2. 3.”format. Though I am still confused on how I am supposed to start my pieces of work, like this one. More and more practice will allow me to become a better writer and feel more confident when creating prices of writing.

Do I think that the things we learned in your class will help me in other classes? No particularly. Yet I still learned a lot about my literary sponsors, and It helped me realize there are a lot of other ways to write. But I still don’t understand how discords are going to affect me. I guess the saying “make of that what you will” is true in this sense. I believe it’s more about the students mentality towards information. For me I was taught to memorize formats and specific ways to do things and I am still moving into that mentality of thinking outside the box thanks to this class.

Writer’s block will always be my enemy, especially in super-specific topic like our “googlepedia” project. I still encounter the problem of knowing what I want to write on the tip of my tongue but never finding the right words to say it. To be honest that is why I am turning this letter in the day of the deadline. It is something I have to keep working on , especially if I want to succeed through my other english classes in the future. So I will be practicing throughout my summer vacation for my next incoming semester.

It was difficult to write this. You said you don’t lie and I don’t want to lie to you. I wanted to be frank with you This class was different from any other english class I have ever been in, and I thank you giving me the opportunity to be learn something that I couldn’t comprehend before. This is something I will keep with me as I continue my academic career, and even on. So thank you for that.

 

Alex torres Artist statment 5/20/19

My audience were people who watch FIFA but don’t think about the organization that runs it. I chose this audience because these supporters are the reason why the World Cup and so many soccer events make money. Therefore, without fans, FIFA would lose its supporters and have to change its structure. I chose a video format because it allows you to visual the suffering that takes place in Brazil and in Qatar currently. Images are a powerful device to persuade when it comes to human rights abuses and corruption because images are crucial in proving the existence of distant suffering and injustice. For example, seeing the working conditions in Qatar helps give reasons as to why FIFA must fix their structure. In addition, fans come from all over the world and speak different languages. Images are a universal and powerful language, giving everyone a clear way to understand why FIFA should be changed. I did have a challenge when making the video. How was I going to pull on the heart strings of the supports of the World Cup and get them to actually take action? It was challenging, but I decided to use the common sounds of the “Goal! Goal! Goal!” Of sport commentators and the thousands of fans surrounding the stadium. All noises you would hear on the tv. Thats how I go the attention of the viewers. I did not revise any help in the making of the video, I would have like some help but there was no-one available that has knowledge like I do in the sport and the controversies behind it. I think it turned out really really, I pulled the heart strings of the already World Cup Supporters while trying to relate to reach more people. So I think it turned out well.

SPORTS GROUP ESSAY

Sports

(PLEASE YOUR THE GOOGLE DOC LINK ALL THE WAY IN THE BOTTOM TO VEIW BEST FORMAT THAT INCLUDES PHOTOS)

 

Karla Macancela, Oscar Curiel, Kristian Darby, Emilio Hernandez, Alexander Torres

 

Intro

Sports has always had its fair share of controversies, From players caught cheating to the very stadium they are playing in. Sports has always been in a special place in people hearts but outrageous circumstances or reoccurring problems within sports have tarnished the name of sports. Today we discuss some of the most controversial stories in sports and the connects between each other.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                          

 

Basketball Injuries

 

  1. Zion Williamson’s knee injury (shoe blown out)

 

Duke freshman Zion Williamson will make his long-awaited return from his knee injury on Thursday as the Blue Devils open up ACC Tournament play vs. Syracuse at 9 p.m. in the quarterfinals. Williamson missed all of the last five games recovering from a Grade 1 mild right knee sprain he sustained on Feb. 20 in the opening minute against rival North Carolina Duke coach Mike Krzyzewski has anticipated Williamson would return for the first game of the postseason. Krzyzewski earlier this week said it was likely he would play in the ACC Tournament, given the trajectory of his rehab and where he stood from a physical standpoint. “The way he looks right now it’s just a matter of getting in game shape” he said after Duke fell to North Carolina on Saturday.

 

My Analysis: At first I was very shocked to see a young basketball player like me get injured like that. The how how it happened looked very suspicious but then again I thought about him being 275 pounds running at full speed. There were many conversations about NIKE and the Nba player whose shoe it was. Paul George, the Small Forward of the Oklahoma City Thunder, the player had which owned the shoe Zion was wearing, had to say that the shoes functions weren’t supposed to be weak. His shoes were designed for impacts like that but unfortunately Zion suffered a gruesome injury due to the lack

 

http://www.espn.com/video/clip?id=26041875

 

Lakers not making the playoffs (Lebrons groin injury)

 

Stephen A. Smith is very concerned about LeBron James’ injury and how it affects the Los Angeles Lakers going into the playoffs and their ability to recruit big-name stars like Anthony Davis or Kevin Durant.

 

My Analysis: Me knowing Lebron is the best player in the world right now I’ve had no worries about him. Everytime he gets injured he would get back even better and stronger due to his high work ethic on the court and off the court.

 

https://youtu.be/jCinaoePbrs

 

  1. Most common NBA injury is a sprained ankle

 

The sprained ankle is the most typical basketball injury at any level.  Players are cutting back and forth, with puts extreme pressure on ankles, which are not strong to begin with. Players also frequently land on each other’s feet, which rolls the ankle in a very dangerous way. Simply put, ankles are the most fragile commodity on the basketball court

 

My Analysis: Me knowing how injuries are in basketball, I once suffered an ankle injury.. Well multiple times. But I’ve never broken any bones or tore any ligaments thank god. But a sprained ankle is a pain when you know you want to just play ball. Knowing you have to go back to the locker room after the injury sucks. The legs are the most vulnerable body part to injure in basketball.

 

https://www.personalinjuryclaimsblawg.com/the-most-common-injuries-suffered-by-nba-players/

 

  1. Current Nba Injuries

 

My Analysis: About half of the Nba is injured currently and its team threatening. Meaning the players injuries can cost the team a lot of games and money. Most of these injuries are sprained ankles or personal reasons why they are out. Most players are resting for the playoffs so they can be at top shape when the time comes around.

 

          https://www.cbssports.com/nba/injuries/  

 

Boxing Scandals

 

Many times throughout the history of boxing, many individuals have tried to reach the top of the ranking lists through cheat and deception, tainting the sport of boxing.

BIlly Collins Jr. v.s Luis Resto Controversy

 

Welterweights Luis Resto (20-8-2, eight KOs) and Billy Collins Jr. (14-0-0, 11 KOs) faced each other at Madison Square Garden on the undercard of the Roberto Duran-Davey Moore bout.  To pretty much everyone’s surprise, journeyman-fighter Resto won a 10-round unanimous decision.

Suspicions aroused by the devastating injuries his son suffered to his face in general and eyes in particular, trainer Billy Sr. found an opportunity to examine Resto’s gloves, noting their thinness.  The New York State Athletic Commission (NYSAC) confirmed the father’s suspicions, determining that someone had removed at least an ounce of padding from the gloves.

Thus, the Resto-Collins match was essentially a one-sided, bare-fisted beat down.

My Analysis: It was very sad reading something like this and witnessing a crime happening within a sport i cherish so much. Billy Collins was a rising prospect that despite fighting a basically bear-fisted man, he did not get knocked out at any point. It really puts into perspective how he could have become a legend for boxing. People like Luis Resto deserve to be in jail for their whole life because they are putting other fighter’s lives in danger.

 

https://www.proboxing-fans.com/luis-resto-vs-billy-collins-jr-the-sweet-science-turned-sour_101512/

 

Sugar Shane Mosley

 

Article: NEW YORK — “Sugar” Shane Mosley told a grand jury in 2003 that he injected himself with the doping agent EPO as he prepared for a fight against Oscar De La Hoya, according to court transcripts and doping calendars reviewed by the New York Daily News.

 

My reaction: It’s very sad when professionals openly admit to cheating and have no repercussions. In the boxing world, an athlete that admits to PED use only gets a 6 month ban and that is a very minor punishment for an athlete that is enhancing their body to give them an unfair advantage on a world stage and competition. I believe that they should have a far harsher punishment for these offences.

 

http://www.espn.com/sports/boxing/news/story?id=3740889

 

BASEBALL

Barry Lamar Bonds use of steroids

 

INTRO

There are many reasons why I have taken this issue. I just wants to show how the government should sway their priorities from Barry to real issues that if not tented to can permanently alter our lives. The Barry Bonds scandal has been a large story in the media for some time now. This dispute of his suspected steroid use and how he has artificially broken Hank Aaron’s home run record has left the public in an uproar. I have made a point to read about Barry Bonds and I have reflected on how should be read by anyone who cares about the America’s future. If such issues as this are to be the headlines then we are headed to our downfall. Changes to the government dealings have to be made and morals need to be reestablished.

 

N.A “Barry Bonds Statistics and History” . Baseball References. N.d. baseball-references.com. Web

 

In this web, it list history of Barry Bonds from when he was born, to his hometown as well as his records in his baseball career. It provides his recognitions, awards received, honors and other appearances while still in MLB. Since his first draft, every statistic from batting, and other position is available to the end of his career. There is also statistics of what could make him the Hall of Fame from different reasons, but not having the award.

 

 

  • IMPORTANT VIDEO ABOUT HIS STEROID RECORD

 

“Victor Conte: Barry Bonds’ drug use” Graham Bensinger 2017

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TOYNUgQM7GA

Victor Conte tells about the illegal drugs Barry Bonds took, how he feels responsible for all of

the athletes who came under investigation as a result of the BALCO raid and offers his input on Bonds’ dramatic home run uptick and gaining significant weight in one offseason. The intended audience is everybody, directed to anyone who wants to know more about the problem of Barry Bonds.

 

 

  • BARRY BONDS TIMELINE

 

Bibliography.com Editors.  “Barry Bonds Bibliography”. A&E Television Networks. N.d.

Bibliography.com.

 

In Barry Bonds’ bibliography, it begins to discuss Barry Bonds’ background story from where he was born to a brief summary of what he was known for. As it discusses his early career with baseball it leads to his fame. In his baseball career, he was breaking records from hitting to later in 2001 breaking the homerun records beating Mark McGwire when he reached 70 home runs. He first denies taking steroids, but began to capture attention after improving his home runs and hittings season after season. Investigations lead to search from Bonds’ trainer to his nutritionist. Although many lawsuits are amongst him, he still denies taking steroids and battles for his Hall of Fame.

 

BARRY BONDS ADMITS USING STEROIDS https://www.smh.com.au/sport/barry-bonds-admits-doing-drugs-but-thought-he-was-taking-flax-seed-oil-court-hears-20110323-1c5zb.html

Controversy between U.S Men and Women in  soccer.

INTRO-

           In the World we have many issues that we not seek as important I chose this topic not only because its creating problems politically but around the world its been an issue.

           There is many controversial between the wage gap between men and women Traditionally men have dominated the world of sports however in recent year’s women’s sports have become popular and with their new found popularity, women’s sports have evolved into marketable leagues of their own. Although women’s sports took a huge leap forward, women players still don’t receive the same financial compensation for playing the same sports in the same arenas as their male counterparts.Equality between people is what makes the United States of America different from other nations. In the United States professional soccer leagues there is a dearth of gender equality. This can be seen through the gender difference in salary. In 2013, professional women soccer players were yearly being paid $15,000 each, about nine times less than the men.Many professional women soccer players that can’t support themselves off their salary and demand for a equal pay for putting the same amount of effort as men and even getting further in competiton.  This issue does not only have to be spread out among others but be resolved not only in sports but in many other issues were women should be equally treated and payed as men for equal amount of labor.

           

“Why does the U.S. women’s soccer team get paid less than the men?” https://www.sfchronicle.com/sports/annkillion/article/Why-does-the-U-S-Women-s-Soccer-team-get-paid-13689380.php

Women as well as men should be payed equally not just by the work they contriubute but because there should be no discrimination against one another everyone is equal and should be treated as such. This text focouses on gender discrimation the U.S women soccer team felt when they played there championship game. This was always an issue but it was never filed , Men were doing equally the same amount of work in the field and champion ship games as women. Fifa awards bonus money for World Cups and the amount of moneyfor the men is greater than for the women. In 2014, the men’s national team with performance bonuses totaling $5,375,000 for losing in the Round of 16, while, in 2015, the USSF provided the women’s national team with only $1,725,000 for winning the entire tournament. Women earned more than three times less than the men while performing better and winning the whole competition.

 

Data: How does the U.S. women’s soccer team pay compare to the men

https://www.pbs.org/newshour/nation/data-how-does-the-u-s-womens-soccer-team-pay-compare-to-the-men

 

In this article it is stated that men as much as women play the same competition but always was a fight for the wages between one another this has happened for a lifetime but this is the first time where this is issued legally and was stated for a complaint. The Women national soccer team gathered in there last game with shirts that said men and women should be treated equally and payed the same nevertheless they are playing the same competiton the Olympic games. The Article shows a data chart where the pay rate is higher for men than women from 2013- present. The article does not only show how womens national team feels but what a proffesional tennis player had to say over this problem.

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x9GqWoy6__s

This Video shows 3 of the Women in the National Team where they were stating what they though was wrong not only the amount they get payed but they have won 4 olympic medals and they still dont get the amount they should for winning such a competitive competition, not only that but they state that they dont get the same leveling field as men do there playing conditions are poorly and increases the amount of injuries and brusing in there body.

 

World Cup Controversy

 

Introductory paragraph: I chose the topic because of my passion for soccer. Every four years a world class competition is made and I have a nostalgic connection to it. The World Cup made my family come together to watch 32 national teams face off to lift the elusive world cup trophy. The competition has been a very big part of many people lives. The world cup is the most watched sporting event in the world. With my love for the game I decided to dig deeper and learn more about the inner-workings of the company FIFA. Surprisingly, in my research, I found out about the controversies surrounding FIFA. At first, I thought the company FIFA was a innocent non-profit that has a great love for the sport. However, there is bigger purpose to FIFA and scandals to it.

 

Waste of money for the hosting country

I chose to research the 2014 World Cup held in Rio, Brazil. Contrary to popular belief, FIFA does not allow host countries to use stadiums that were already built, requiring host countries to build brand new stadiums. The Brazilian government has spent more than 11 billion dollars getting ready for the World Cup. In addition, the stadiums have to be so big that they can only be built in locations that are far away from cities. This adds to the cost. For example, one of Brazil’s biggest purchases is located in the small city of Manaus, building a brand new 270 million dollar stadium. Manuois is so remote that it is almost impossible to reach by car, which is why officials had to have the stadium materials brought in by boat. This is a waste of money because the stadium is only going to be used for 4 World Cup games and there’s no team in Manaus that can fill it afterwards.Therefore making the stadium useless after the event. This caused riots in the streets of Rio as local residents are outraged with the major spending in the competition rather than spending money for greater causes.

 

My analysis: For a competition, I understand how a country with a failing economy can have many people are outraged. My eyes have been opened to some of the financial aspects of the world famous competition.  https://www.businessinsider.com/300-million-world-cup-stadium-is-nearly-abandoned-2018-6

 

FIFA (federation internationale de futbol association)

 

FIFA is one of the world’s largest and well known nonprofits. Nevertheless, former president of FIFA Sepp Blatter ran the organization with absolute power, took bribes, and acted with impunity. The most recent controversy was a bribery scandal in choosing where the World Cup will be chosen. The host of the 2022 World Cup will be Qatar. A place where temperatures can reach 131 degrees Fahrenheit. A difficult environment to hold a professional sporting event outdoors. Qatar successfully bribed FIFA voters to secure its place as the host country. Major concerns about Qatar being chosen were raised and issues with infrastructure and safety were predicted. Now that Qatar is getting ready to host, all the predictions are coming true. Regarded as “slave state in the 21st century” Qatar’s residents and immigrant workers are often times held captive by their bosses who withhold their visas. Leaving workers trapped there. In an expose from MSNBC, Qatar’s deplorable practices were shown. Bosses take advantage of poor immigrants with high hopes and working contracts. These bosses seize their passports upon arrival and force them to work for almost nothing. Furthermore, working conditions are hazardous, so much so that an “estimated 4000 plus workers are dying before the first ball is even kicked in 2022”.

 

My analysis: FIFA has always been just a simple company in my eyes that  just controls the rules of soccer. Nevertheless, with all the research I have found I have truly understood what horrors come with conducting the world’s most watched competition. Now I understand how something like this is truly controversial. I am truly outraged about the scandals around Qatar and the way these contracting companies are treating their workers.

 

https://www.msnbc.com/all-in/watch/the-world-cup-disaster-in-qatar-269032515792

GOOGLE DOC LINK:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/114RayBosuwgzIKGkSczqt9R7eORUcn9vTMNV0DulXTc/edit?usp=sharing

my info in discord groups

i think i feel i have a very goo dundertanding ui the video games communities, thats where i spent alot of my tie while i was a preteen and it helped shape who i am today, but i think i also have knowlege in fahsion groups. i learned about them through my friends and just browing the web by myself.

#3. How much freedom do you enjoy when writing? Does it help to have a form to follow, or do you find it to be limiting?

i helped my depending on what im writing about, if its about me and my emotion then i chose to right freely. but if irts about a subject essay it would really help if i had a format to help me look at so i can really sturcute my essay.

 

my gaming and social expirenince

my experience in discourse communities was relaying, i was introduced to it by my friends who i met thought my video games and that made a new way to communicate to them and it made me and my friends close, and then i branch into other gores about topics and it was really cool. so i would say my experience would be very good, obviously there have been bullying for other people but for me it was very wholesome.

world cup google searching

  1. Searched “world cup controversy” on Google because i’ve always used google and i felt confident on giving e good info
  2. Clicked on “ https://www.msnbc.com/all-in/watch/the-world-cup-disaster-in-qatar-269032515792 ” titled “the world cup disaster in Qatar” because it was exactly what i was looking for as it pertained to my subject.
  3.  I went back to google and clicked on “https://www.businessinsider.com/300-million-world-cup-stadium-is-nearly-abandoned-2018-6” titled “300 million world cup is nearly abandoned” and that on egave me more insgiht to related worlcuo diasters that happened before
  4. after that i thought that i found enough info as they really proved my point of why the world cup is bad so i stopped

world cup idea

I chose the topic because of my passion for soccer. Every four years a world class competition is made and I have a nostalgic connection to it. The World Cup made my family come together to watch 32 national teams face off to lift the elusive world cup trophy. The competition has been a very big part of many people lives. The world cup is the most watched sporting event in the world. With my love for the game I decided to dig deeper and learn more about the inner-workings of the company FIFA. Surprisingly, in my research, I found out about the controversies surrounding FIFA. At first, I thought the company FIFA was a innocent non-profit that has a great love for the sport. However, there is bigger purpose to FIFA and scandals to it.

alexander torres indivusal draft

 

World Cup Controversy

 

Introductory paragraph: I chose the topic because of my passion for soccer. Every four years a world class competition is made and I have a nostalgic connection to it. The World Cup made my family come together to watch 32 national teams face off to lift the elusive world cup trophy. The competition has been a very big part of many people lives. The world cup is the most watched sporting event in the world. With my love for the game I decided to dig deeper and learn more about the inner-workings of the company FIFA. Surprisingly, in my research, I found out about the controversies surrounding FIFA. At first, I thought the company FIFA was a innocent non-profit that has a great love for the sport. However, there is bigger purpose to FIFA and scandals to it.

 

Waste of money for the hosting country

I chose to research the 2014 World Cup held in Rio, Brazil. Contrary to popular belief, FIFA does not allow host countries to use stadiums that were already built, requiring host countries to build brand new stadiums. The Brazilian government has spent more than 11 billion dollars getting ready for the World Cup. In addition, the stadiums have to be so big that they can only be built in locations that are far away from cities. This adds to the cost. For example, one of Brazil’s biggest purchases is located in the small city of Manaus, building a brand new 270 million dollar stadium. Manuois is so remote that it is almost impossible to reach by car, which is why officials had to have the stadium materials brought in by boat. This is a waste of money because the stadium is only going to be used for 4 World Cup games and there’s no team in Manaus that can fill it afterwards.Therefore making the stadium useless after the event. This caused riots in the streets of Rio as local residents are outraged with the major spending in the competition rather than spending money for greater causes.

 

My analysis: For a competition, I understand how a country with a failing economy can have many people are outraged. My eyes have been opened to some of the financial aspects of the world famous competition.  https://www.businessinsider.com/300-million-world-cup-stadium-is-nearly-abandoned-2018-6

 

FIFA (federation internationale de futbol association)

 

FIFA is one of the world’s largest and well known nonprofits. Nevertheless, former president of FIFA Sepp Blatter ran the organization with absolute power, took bribes, and acted with impunity. The most recent controversy was a bribery scandal in choosing where the World Cup will be chosen. The host of the 2022 World Cup will be Qatar. A place where temperatures can reach 131 degrees Fahrenheit. A difficult environment to hold a professional sporting event outdoors. Qatar successfully bribed FIFA voters to secure its place as the host country. Major concerns about Qatar being chosen were raised and issues with infrastructure and safety were predicted. Now that Qatar is getting ready to host, all the predictions are coming true. Regarded as “slave state in the 21st century” Qatar’s residents and immigrant workers are often times held captive by their bosses who withhold their visas. Leaving workers trapped there. In an expose from MSNBC, Qatar’s deplorable practices were shown. Bosses take advantage of poor immigrants with high hopes and working contracts. These bosses seize their passports upon arrival and force them to work for almost nothing. Furthermore, working conditions are hazardous, so much so that an “estimated 4000 plus workers are dying before the first ball is even kicked in 2022”.

 

My analysis: FIFA has always been just a simple company in my eyes that  just controls the rules of soccer. Nevertheless, with all the research I have found I have truly understood what horrors come with conducting the world’s most watched competition. Now I understand how something like this is truly controversial. I am truly outraged about the scandals around Qatar and the way these contracting companies are treating their workers.

 

https://www.msnbc.com/all-in/watch/the-world-cup-disaster-in-qatar-269032515792

alex torres writers statement

When i look back at it now i have a pretty good idea of what discord communities are, and i can identify some of them in my own personal life, from soccer, to college students to vide games. I do see the the corralation a topic like that has in many people life. My problem with it though is that i don’t have much information after that, are i don’t know how it impacts me in anyway so I think I get the topic but i do not understand the point of identifying an idea like that. Rhetorical questions I understand on a social aspect, when you as an audience a question that is not supposed to be answered, but just like the discord communities I don’t understand t the purpose of it. In my honest opinion i have not thought about these ideas in my everyday life, and I would like to learn more and maybe see how it would impact in the groups of friends i make abd how i associate with them. But other than in class I have never thought about these topics outside of class. I think it is because discord communties are not at easily to identify and see if it is worth it to be in those groups, if it benifits you or not.