Author Archives: Jody R. Rosen

Note-taking

What kinds of notes did we take?

  • quick summary of each paragraph in the margins
  • underlined anything interesting and annotation in the margin to say what was interesting about it
  • circled words to look up
  • who is the article about
  • the setting of the essay
  • voice/tone of the article
  • look for patterns (creating oppositions of positive and negative about collaboration)
  • highlighted things we agreed with

Monuments

what’s a monument?

Something dedicated to someone:

  • statue
  • plaque
  • something decorated, maybe a plant or flowers
  • building
  • street names
  • bicycles (dedicated to cyclists where they were killed)
  • parks
  • public art
  • geography
    • river
    • land
    • etc
  • money
    • who’s pictured on it
  • flags

 

Cover Letter for Project #1

In class, we’ll reflect on Project #1 by writing a cover letter for the work you have already posted on our site. Please answer these in any order you wish:

In combining both letter and process post, please write about the following:

  • What are you most proud of in Project #1?
  • What challenged you the most in Project #1?
  • Did you meet the requirements of the assignment?
  • If you had another few hours to work on your project, what would you change?
  • How much time did you spend on each part of the project? Overall?
  • What did you take away from reading your classmates’ work, from their comments, and from class discussions?
  • If you could have changed the assignment, how would you have changed it? What would you insist on not changing?
  • Is there anything else I should know about your work or about you as a writer or as a student?

My comments to you will come in the form of a letter in response to your cover letter, so it is helpful to me to read about how you work and what you think of your work.

Please take the time to revise or edit your work and be sure the final version is online by 8pm tonight.

Reminders for Monday’s class

A few reminders for Monday, 9/11:

  • Project #1 is due on our site by 9am. Be sure to post your work and to follow instructions for posting it.
  • Be sure to bring a copy of Project #1 to class.
  • At this point, you should have joined our course (though a couple of you have not yet).
  • At this point, you should have informally introduced yourself by replying to my blog post from 8/28 and commented on several classmates’ introductions.
  • To keep up with the semester-long glossary assignment, you should have already posted your first entry (and revised it if necessary) and probably your second as well (Monday completes our second week of classes since last Monday was a holiday). Be sure to follow the instructions. Remember that words should come from our class unless there is an important reason that you would include a word from elsewhere (another course, another text, real life, etc), and that your readers should be able to understand the word from reading your explanation, rather than doing any of the work of interpreting for themselves.

How to read an image

For Project #1, you have to explain how an image represents you so well that you can use it as your OpenLab avatar. You also have to consider how it might be misinterpreted or interpreted differently than you intended. Here are some tools for reading an image.

Observe, then interpret

Ask:

What stands out? What is less obvious?

What is the main subject? The supporting subject(s)?

 

People: Identify the people, one or a group, gender, age, relationship to each other, clothing

Time: what time of day, season, year, period, century?

Activities/Events: what are the people (or other entities) doing, what event is taking place?

Place: is it urban/rural, indoor/outdoor? What buildings, landscapes, etc?

Further questions:

What is the context?

Where is the viewer? (if it’s a photograph, where is the photographer?)

What is the purpose of the image? Who is its audience?

What issues are included?

What is the message of the image?

How would you summarize the image in a paragraph?

Starting Peer Review

Peer Review evaluation criteria (a standard on which a judgment or decision may be based)

 

  • improvements they can make on structure
  • do I have a clear understanding of their writing?
  • does it meet the requirements?
  • vocabulary: is it used properly? is it at the college level?
  • what stands out: positive or negative (e.g. “this is what stands out to me when I read this paragraph”; “this is what I understand when I read this paragraph”)
  • grammar and usage: look for things like run-on sentences and sentence fragments, punctuation, (AT THE END)
  • read it out loud
  • do they come across as they want to? for our bios, is it the brochure version?
  • be purposeful with I
  • Look at the grading guidelines to understand how it meets the expectations for ENG 1101 writing.

 

glossary

glossary (noun): a dictionary of the special terms in a particular field or job

“Glossary entries: contribute to our course’s glossary by writing one post per week (or more if you choose) in which you find a word that you need to better understand, follow the glossary instructions, and write a post that has the word as the title of the post, Glossary as the category, tags you find relevant, and all the things in the post it’s supposed to have” (Guidelines for Blogging on the OpenLab)

Each week, I will add a post that includes the definition of a word I wanted to understand better, plus its context and an explanation of its meaning, so the whole class can understand that word. It’s not just defining one word I don’t know, but collecting these words and definitions into a larger resource, like a dictionary of terms for ENG 1101.

Introducing ourselves

Although we introduced ourselves in class briefly, and we’ll introduce ourselves more formally in Project #1, please write an introduction here as a way to help us get to know each other better. Aim to write 250-300 words. This is your chance to say all the things you forgot to say in class, or to say again all the things you crafted and said brilliantly.

If you have successfully created an OpenLab account, log in before you comment so the system can recognize you. Otherwise, fill in the required information and get started!

Check back again and reply to at least a few of your classmates, asking questions or letting them know about shared interests.

Welcome!

Welcome to the site for ENG 1101-D351, Locating Writing. We will spend a significant amount of time and effort this semester on this site, so please take some time to look around. As the semester continues, we will add more materials, so be sure to explore frequently in addition to sharing your work and reading and responding to your classmates’ work.