After meeting with Professor Wu and joining a couple of sessions of tutoring, I was given a lot of resourceful advice. My writing was slacking lately tremendously. After being informed of the specifics of what exactly needs to be corrected …
Category: Student Work
Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative-Rehana Parvin
After reading Professor Wu’s comments on all my RAB proposals and source entries and essays, I plan to revise my work better by working with the tutors and reading carefully on all the instructions. I just need to work better …
Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative- Mateo
After studying Professor Wu’s comments on my essay, I plan to use more formal writing ,meaning getting rid of gonna and sorta and better paragraph breaks. I will create another scene on how I went from teacher to teacher asking …
Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative-Sangay.
After reading Professor Wu’s feedback on my FD#1, I would like to revise few things during my spring break. Firstly, I have to think of a better title. I need a whole new paragraph in conclusion to deliver the main …
Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative – Richard G. Bordes
After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my Narrative Essay, I plan to work on developing more scenes for some of my key points. Like where I mentioned how I’ve molded some of the values my parents tried to instill …
Final Revisions ED Narative – Gentian Dumani
After studying Mrs. Wu’s comments on my education narrative I will work on improving my CSD throughout my essay, work on my paragraph breaks, fix up minor grammar errors, and finally make the connection to Malcolm X clearer. I have …
Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative — Jaqueline
After studying Professor Wu’s comments on my FD 1, I will work on adding specific details. I need to expand on what was stopping me from applying for financial aid and how it was affecting my mother and I. I …
RAB Conclusion- David Antwi
In my research, I learned so much on how the corona virus pandemic affected the way people exercise and stay fit. When I first started to research about this topic, I was not really trying to understand more about the …
RAB Source Entry #3-David Antwi
Part 1 MLA Citation
Ayden Bazemore (Heavily in tune with the fitness world) In person Interview Bronx NY. April 13, 2022
part 2 Summary
My friend Ayden is 19 years of age and I have known him since mid school. …
RAB Source Entry #3 – Leslie Martinez
RAB Source Entry #3: Interview with my best friend
MLA Citation:
Yahir, Vazquez, [Teenager ]. Personal Interview in person. New York, NY. April 15, 2022.
Summary:
My best friend is an 18-year-old who lives with his mom, stepdad, and stepbrother …