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Final Revisions ED Narative-Devin

After reading Professor Wu’s notes on my RAB final draft,I realized she was right in stating I can word the entire piece better. In most of my rhetorical analysis sections, I was rather vague in my writing and not really …

Author DėvïnTåyłørPosted on April 30, 2022April 30, 2022Categories Final Revision Ideas Ed NarrativeLeave a comment on Final Revisions ED Narative-Devin

Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative- Leslie Martinez

After meeting with Professor Wu and joining a couple of sessions of tutoring, I was given a lot of resourceful advice. My writing was slacking lately tremendously. After being informed of the specifics of what exactly needs to be corrected …

Author Leslie MartinezPosted on April 19, 2022April 19, 2022Categories Final Revision Ideas Ed NarrativeLeave a comment on Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative- Leslie Martinez

Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative-Rehana Parvin

After reading Professor Wu’s comments on all my RAB proposals and source entries and essays, I plan to revise my work better by working with the tutors and reading carefully on all the instructions. I just need to work better …

Author Rehana ParvinPosted on April 19, 2022April 21, 2022Categories Final Revision Ideas Ed NarrativeLeave a comment on Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative-Rehana Parvin

Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative- Mateo

After studying Professor Wu’s comments on my essay, I plan to use more formal writing ,meaning getting rid of gonna and sorta and better paragraph breaks. I will create another scene on how I went from teacher to teacher asking …

Author MateoPosted on April 18, 2022April 18, 2022Categories Final Revision Ideas Ed NarrativeLeave a comment on Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative- Mateo

Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative-Sangay.

After reading Professor Wu’s feedback on my FD#1, I would like to revise few things during my spring break. Firstly, I have to think of a better title. I need a whole new paragraph in conclusion to deliver the main …

Author Sangay DolmaPosted on April 18, 2022April 18, 2022Categories Final Revision Ideas Ed NarrativeLeave a comment on Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative-Sangay.

Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative – Richard G. Bordes

After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my Narrative Essay, I plan to work on developing more scenes for some of my key points. Like where I mentioned how I’ve molded some of the values my parents tried to instill …

Author Richard G BordesPosted on April 18, 2022April 18, 2022Categories Final Revision Ideas Ed NarrativeLeave a comment on Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative – Richard G. Bordes

Final Revisions ED Narative – Gentian Dumani

After studying Mrs. Wu’s comments on my education narrative I will work on improving my CSD throughout my essay, work on my paragraph breaks, fix up minor grammar errors, and finally make the connection to Malcolm X clearer. I have …

Author Gentian DumaniPosted on April 18, 2022April 18, 2022Categories Final Revision Ideas Ed NarrativeLeave a comment on Final Revisions ED Narative – Gentian Dumani

Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative — Jaqueline

After studying Professor Wu’s comments on my FD 1, I will work on adding specific details. I need to expand on what was stopping me from applying for financial aid and how it was affecting my mother and I. I …

Author JaquelinePosted on April 18, 2022Categories Final Revision Ideas Ed NarrativeLeave a comment on Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative — Jaqueline

Writing Celebration — Lisa

I will be reading two paragraphs from my Unit 3 Letter Genre Assignment on disinformation in the time of Co-vid. …

Author L WuPosted on December 15, 2021December 15, 2021Categories Writing CelebrationLeave a comment on Writing Celebration — Lisa

Final Revision Ideas Education Narrative — Lisa

Revision on Education Narrative

After studying Prof. Wu’s comments on my essay, I plan to develop two more scenes at key points in my story, in P. 4 and P. 6.  I plan to break up large blocks of dialogue …

Author L WuPosted on December 9, 2021April 17, 2022Categories Final Revision Ideas Ed NarrativeLeave a comment on Final Revision Ideas Education Narrative — Lisa

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