After reading Professor Wu’s comments on all my RAB proposals and source entries and essays, I plan to revise my work better by working with the tutors and reading carefully on all the instructions. I just need to work better on the rhetorical analysis and my essays especially if I’m gonna explains one timeline. and I will improve my RAB and essays by making connection and being more specific. I realized that I have a hard time connecting to the reader and reading like a writer, which needs to be fixed. I would also have to work on my summary a little better as well.