After studying Professor Wu’s comments on my essay, I plan to use more formal writing ,meaning getting rid of gonna and sorta and better paragraph breaks. I will create another scene on how I went from teacher to teacher asking them how I could bring my grade up using CSD . I also plan to use a clear connection to one of the previous readings by re-reading the malcolm x or any other piece we read to find the best connection. I will make a one on one meeting with the tutor before submitting my final revised Ed narrative.
