Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative-Sangay.

After reading Professor Wu’s feedback on my FD#1, I would like to revise few things during my spring break. Firstly, I have to think of a better title. I need a whole new paragraph in conclusion to deliver the main point about my educational journey. I plan to work on organizing transitions of my life events to connect with readers.

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