Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative — Jaqueline

After studying Professor Wu’s comments on my FD 1, I will work on adding specific details. I need to expand on what was stopping me from applying for financial aid and how it was affecting my mother and I. I also need to describe how exactly my mom was supporting me. I need to provide more emotions, feelings, and thoughts. I have to create and organize a clear timeline and structure in my story. The current missing gaps need to be properly filled in. Lastly, I will also work on my Malcom X connection.

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