My partner for the weekly critique was my sister Angela. I was looking over her work and noticed some things about her character design and concepts. For her character design I think she needs to work on variety and really focusing on fabric draping. She said that it was difficult to find references for a poncho and really struggled to make sense of the way the fabric would fall/drape. With that being said, I think she still did really good in her final character design. She did good referring to boots and the hair has a really nice flow to it. For her concepts I thought concept one was good but I think Robin needs to look more like she’s about to attack for example, have her bow and arrow pointed at the horse drawn carriage. For concept one it will be better if she makes those changes. I also enjoyed the bird drawings of Robin’s friend little John.