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Project #3 Draft

Ever since it’s establishment, New York City has been a city known for it’s diversity. Nicknamed the “melting pot”, New York City is home to many niche communities of various immigrants who have formed their own “New Yorks.” These little communities that have overlapped have created what is unique to New York, positively improving our urban landscape. But while there are many positive overlaps in much of New York City, as described by Whitehead and McGrath, there are also a lot of negative overlaps created by gentrification, that are hurtful to New York City’s cultural landscape.

The location I chose is a tiny corner on the edge of Chinatown. It’s around a 25 minute walk from City tech, you cross the Manhattan bridge, and walk down Canal towards Essex street. Seeing that what was once a deli and Chinese breakfast cafe become a trendy coffee joint really shocked me. I remembered waking up Saturday mornings and taking the train from Queens to Chinatown for doctors appointments, and buying soda from the Deli and waiting for my father to get coffee. What used to be so insignificant suddenly means a lot to me. The whole feeling of the area completely changed as well. It used to be bustling in the morning, The East Broadway station used to be full of people coming in and out, but now few people pass through. It used to be a busy center of transport, but now it’s a relaxed open environment. I hadn’t been to Chinatown most of high school, It took me a while to realize that this new area with Cafes was the same area I used to get breakfast from before Saturday school and doctor’s appointments. There is also a very distinct border to Chinatown and the lower east side. And you can feel the Lower East Side slowly encroaching, pushing Chinatown out of New York City.

Overlaps like this are a big problem because residents from Chinatown are primarily elderly and lack communication skills. They’re immigrants who came to New York and formed a community to help each other survive in their rough new environment. But as the city aged, it seems like Chinatown never did, The shops remain the same, the people remain the same, but it’s slowly dying. Kids are moving out and starting new lives and leaving the elderly behind to fend for themselves. The elderly are no match for the trendy hipsters moving in across the street. Raising rent, language barrier, and the public viewing them as lesser has made it hard for the elderly to push back and prevent the Lower East Side from pushing them in.

So what can we do about it? Media is the biggest way to help Chinatown. Educating the population and gaining sympathy is the best way to gain traction in this fight. Workshops where we can inform others about the struggles of keeping Chinatown alive. Promoting communication and community effort will greatly help Chinatown and New York City as a whole.

Technology and Society (draft)

Imagine yourself getting off the train at Jay and Metrotech. Once you get off the trains there are many exits but you must take the easiest exit which is Jay street and Wilghony street. You take the elevator up and make a left and walk down that street. You will see a couple of buildings like the Credit Union, a sunglasses store and across from you will pass the NYU building and Starbucks. As you keep walking down you will come across Kings County Family Court. You continue to walk straight but now you are crossing the street. Now you are on the campus of City Tech and across the street you will find City Tech’s new building under construction. Both of these buildings belong to City Tech however both of them are very different when it comes to their exterior. This is a clear representation of juxtaposition, which can be defined as, the act or an instance of placing two or more things side by side often to compare or contrast or to create an interesting effect. These two buildings have the same purpose to educate but their design is so different. The modern look of the new building is a representation as how our society is evolving with technology.

The building across the street is very modern. The exterior itself is all glass which gives it a very modern taste. A glass building gives a reputation of being sophisticated which is the contrary to the building we are in now. The building we are in has a old design but not antique. Many educational buildings have smart boards but our school has chalkboards. The truth is before I came to City Tech the last time I had a chalkboard when I was in 6 grade. Our hallways are also kinda bland they lack that modern touch the building across the street has. Getting to this location was not very long but very hectic because Jay street is very busy in general. The area that has most traffic is usually outside the train station because everyone is rushing to get to work.

I decided to chose these building because I really like to see the huge difference of buildings in New York. I like to see the change of designs architects apply to our buildings nowadays. These new buildings really help us see the change in the world we live because we have modernized. The new design of buildings help testify how much as a nation we have industrialized and how we continue to grow. The buildings that are yet to be remodeled help us see how our New York was before. These buildings have history and culture tied within them so they still have relevant value. In the reading “City Limits” written by Colson Whitehead helps support my statement multiple times. On page 3 paragraph 2 we read that Whitehead also witnessed change in his neighborhood. On the same page but 1 paragraph, Whitehead goes on to further state that he was close to the buildings but to those who an business in them. He states, “if you had known, perhaps you would have stepped behind the counter and shaken everyone’s hand, pulled out the disposable camera and insured posing instructions”. A final supportive part of the passage can be found on page 3 paragraph 3 Whitehead states that he wished his part buildings could piece his life together to show his evolution as a person.

Personally, I have mixed feeling about juxtaposition because of the effects it brings to many neighborhoods. Many neighborhoods are made by immigrants and they integrate their culture within them allowing this mixture of culture make them feel closer to home. However, this modernization takes away with this sense of home. Although, this is a downfall, our neighborhoods are becoming a more representation as a society. This is a perk because as a nation we seem more industrialized and wealthy. Unfortunately, to achieve this representation many of our beloved neighborhoods have to be sacrificed. In conclusion, juxtaposition has a beauty to it but it overshadowed other beauties within our home.

Overlapping Brooklyns

Looking at the photograph from Brooklyn Historical Society, we observe:

African-American family in the foreground

  • wearing casual clothing
  • helps us date the photograph
  • child petting cat
  • broken railing
  • graffiti
  • screens
  • curtains

Orthodox Jewish family in the background:

  • formal attire
  • air conditioning
  • blinds in the windows
  • fallout shelter (do all buildings have this?)

Overlaps:

  • racial/ethnic/religious overlaps
  • socioeconomic overlap
  • new vs old home technologies/outfittings
  • recreation vs. not
  • ornamentation vs. worn-down buildings

Thesis statement:

  • Despite their location next to each other on the block,
  • Although both houses have similar architecture,
  • The two families differ in their appearance and activity, yet they both

Organization:

  • block format
    • all about one
    • all about the other
    • comparison
    • or
    • all about one
    • all about the other with comparison to the first
  • point-by-point
    • one element and comparison
    • another element and comparison
    • another element and comparison etc
  • a combination of the two

Including quotations

  • introduce it
  • quote it (and cite it)
  • interpret it: “In other words…”
  • analyze it
  • apply it back to your thesis

Summary for Self

In “A Literary Visitor Strolls In From The Airport” by Charles McGrath , the author talks about a writer who travels through New York without using public transportation. He shows aspects of the city and gives insight on sights that many may not have noticed as a New Yorker. In the feature article McGrath speaks about Mr.Self who opens the reader’s eyes about traveling to particular areas by walking. For example, he talked about asking directions and responses that he got. The author draws his readers in with examples to make us think about the experience of walking through the city as opposed to driving. One of those would be Self’s walk from JFK airport to the Crowne Plaza Hotel, which is a 26 mile walk. His walk’s trajectory goes from Queens to Brooklyn to Manhattan. Throughout that journey he talks about some of the sights he sees including some familiar and unfamiliar areas such as Eastern Parkway, the projects on Glendale and Flatbush Avenue. He offers specific details of what he experienced visually. In addition, he tends to comment about what these sights say about life in America. For example, “There is a deep sadness to American society, greater than the sadness of any kind. It’s because America has such ideology of success”. The author expresses how Will Self’s walking is a stress reliever for his addiction to alcohol and drugs, noting that “ walking made him feel better than drugs ever did”. Mr. Self takes us around Queens, Brooklyn, and Manhattan and as he gets close to his destination, he makes commentary about architecture of landmarks such as the Municipal Building. Mr. Self finally concludes that NY is more complex than what the naked eye sees. According to Self, “Actually , instead of looking at individual buildings, it makes more metaphorical sense to think of New York as one enormous chunk of masonry that has been cut up and carved away”.     

Summarizing Colsen Whitehead’s Article

In “City Limits” by Colson Whitehead, the author speaks about life as a true New Yorker and how the city is portrayed and viewed by those who live there. He mainly grabs the reader’s attention by using his personal experiences and hypothetical scenarios to show everyone has their own private New York. According to Whitehead, a true New Yorker tends to remember the old things but they also notice change. For example, Whitehead talks about the Pan Am building, which is referred to as the Met Life building today. This is an example of old New York overlapping new New York. He states that someone else might just see the Met Life building and they’re wrong but he states that he is also wrong. This is because he sees what it used to be, the Pan Am building. This relates to his other point of New Yorkers being resistant to change. He later goes on to speak about the the changes in everyone’s “private New York”. Our private New York is described as our own experiences of New York through the changes we see. In our private New York we may not have known each other but we may have encountered the same places or things. Whitehead also notes that, as we remember the city through our experiences, it also remembers us and our many flaws. In our New York, the city sees us at our best and worse & has yet to judge us. Whitehead makes a comment about how NYers should respect and appreciate the city as much as it does for us. For example, “New York City does not hold our former self against us. Perhaps we can extend the courtesy”. Throughout the article, Colson Whitehead’s tone tends to shift, along with his perspective. He seems to have an informal tone for that focused on himself and his own feelings about the city in the beginning. It later shifts to talk about how the city treats us and the appreciation we have or should have for it in return.  

 

Brooklyn Navy Yard

I chose the Brooklyn Navy Yard as it has a great importance not just in New York City’s history, but the history of all of the United States itself. The Brooklyn Navy Yard was where we had a huge impact in the young nations fight against the British and once, free, a part in every war that the nation had part in. Today it has become a relic of the past and is now becoming something sort of a museum as it is there to show how things were in the past. The Shipyard was made in 1801 and Americas first warship, the USS OHIO was built. After this many warships were built in the Brooklyn Navy Yard such as the USS  Savannah, Peacock, Dolphin, Vincennes, Fulton II, Decatur, San Jacinto, and Niagara. It was once an integral part of the US NAVY but now it lays decrepit. However some buildings are being renovated which will be a great thing for the area. 

My choice of overlapping NY

the reason why i choose my place was because it was so much going on in that neighborhood a lot of construction a lot of people shopping and it was in the heart of downtown Brooklyn not to far from the Barclay center . I choose this particular place of the one at 287 Ashland place of them building affordable apartments but right across from that is condominiums. So with that being said it was i choose this place do we really need more apartments that we cannot afford in these great neighbor hoods or  do we need things that we can afford. According to Colson  white head “this place multiplies when your not looking . We move over here we move over their”.According to Colson  if you go back to your neighbor they remain and everything else disappeared this idea supports my overlapping New York .  Because it talks about the constant changes in your neighborhood with the constant construction of New housing but not enough affordable housing. this is my reason of choosing this overlap and why . Do we really need more condominiums going up in our neighborhoods or do we need those apartment that are going up to be some kind of affordable units for those who have been living in those community who watch their neighborhood change from one thing to another from empty parking lots to full shopping malls within a matter of months . So this will be my overlapping of NY. We have millions of buildings being implanted into our neighborhood while trying to move out the people who has been living their forever. Building s and shopping mall replacing the mom and pop shops.

Warehouse Juxaposition

The walk started when I was looking for a monument that is being removed or should be removed for controversy. But this isn’t a building that had repairs on the outside or a new name to show it and according to google maps it doesn’t have a pinpoint. The path I took put me in-front of the US post office and the U.S Bankruptcy Court-East District of NY. You will then see Walt Whitman park and continue to Columbia Hts. Then you walk down towards Old Fulton Street and the building is on Front st. It is across the street from Julian’s pizza and Grimaldi’s pizza. Now you are in dumbo. What made me choose this as a juxtaposition was a conversation with my cousin. Him and I were listening to Jay-z lyrics from his new album and he referred to dumbo as a opportunity to an investment that he missed out on. Before when a place in dumbo was worth 2 it’s now worth 25 million. The building is now a full service coop. The interface is now that the building no longer is occupied by the press or its employees walking in and out, there are now residents walking in and out with a doorman at there service. My juxtaposition is located on 28 Old Fulton Street.The Eagle Warehouse is now renovated condominiums but the facade is the same as its original. So it looks like a vacant warehouse that used to be The Brooklyn Daily Eagle.

Water and Main Street Juxtaposition

While my colleague Joe and I ventured through Dumbo we stumbled across what seems to be an old warehouse building and in the far distance a large skyscraper under construction is overlooking it. It peaked my interest as soon as I lay eyes on it because it’s ironic to see such an old  factory building in an already gentrified area and overlooking it a high-rise building that is just being constructed. The exact location of the old factory building is 35 Main Street & Water Street, and the location of the yet to be complete skyscraper is difficult to find. The second photo got me even more interested in the this juxtaposition. it’s the same spot but the photo was taken in October of 2007. I love seeing photos from the past and comparing it to what it is now, it’s the best way to relive a moment of a time that I wasn’t there for.