Project 4 draft outline

-introduction about the new routes and how it can change a mood or a mentality of a person throughout the day (thesis statement)

-journey on experiment used multiple days on new route to Citytech to the old route and how different it is compared to one another (the music, smells, sounds, scenery, space, ect.)

-results to the experiment and how it improved overall mood at mornings  and how i spent time enjoying the silence and surroundings of my walk compared to old walk commute results

-show source to provide evidence on thesis statement or if its a counterpoint to my thesis

-show another outside source to provide evidence on thesis statement or if its a counterpoint to my thesis

-conclude essay with how such a little change in ones route can make a big impact to someones mood or mentality for the rest of the evening.

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