Camoufaged

(verb)

Definition: to hide (something) by covering it up or making it harder to see

source: http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/camouflage

“How to Tell a True War Story”:

“what happens is, these guys get themselves deep in the bush, all comouflaged up, and they lie down and wait and that;s all they do, nothing else, they lie there for seven straight days and just listen.”

Even though the soldiers are cover up themselves, but the mysterious sound follow them, I can tell the music come from their heart, their mind.

Project 4 New Draft: Tragedies Collide

The Brooklyn Bridge is the first thing someone might think about Brooklyn, there are various reasons why. When we think of the Brooklyn Bridge all we see are the tangible features that it offers us. The events that occurred while developing the bridge and even after it was built are not visible to us which means many people are not aware of them. Thousands of New York residents cross this bridge every day yet not many would know of controversies that have occurred involving the Brooklyn Bridge. Two distinct stories lie in the death of John A. Roebling and the Stampede of 1883. One story revolves around the architect responsible of the Bridge and his death while the other story revolves a tragedy that could’ve been prevented. These accounts have similarities and differences in which we will analyze.

The man responsible for the Brooklyn Bridge went by the name of John A. Roebling. He planned to make the Bridge the biggest suspension bridge during its time due to new ways of building suspension bridges[1]. After construction began, tragedy soon struck. Roebling, while being the architect was also assisting in building the bridge. He was on site one day taking compass readings on some pilings at a ferry slip. He wasn’t aware when the boat banged into the slip, his foot was violently caught on the pilings[2]. He was rushed to his sons house in Brooklyn Heights, not too far from where the bridge stands today. There the doctors amputated his toes and all seemed to be fine. That was until he passed away three weeks later on due to an illness. The tragedy wouldn’t end here as his son took over the project, his son and various workers died to diseases coming from working at the Bridge. This controversy would spread throughout Brooklyn as it was historical tragedies.

The Bridge was alas opened to the public on May 24, 1883. It took just 6 days for a tragedy to happen. The Bridge, being new was asked to be tested on its endurance by a man by the name of P.T Barnum. He proposed an elephant march along with various animals to promote his circus and at the same time prove to the public that the bridge was safe and stable[3]. He was denied this event but on May 30, 1883, a huge stampede was unleashed. On the day of May 30th, rumors spread throughout the bridge that it was going to collapse. This let out a huge fear on people as they rushed to get off the bridge, trampling people without care as their main goal was to save their own lives. No one trusted the bridge so when those comments where made, a terrible stampede began. In the end, 12 people were trampled and 36 left injured[4]. The scene was terrible and controversy let out because if P.T Barnum would’ve been allowed to do his elephant march, this tragedy could’ve been prevented.

These two accounts are surrounded by death and sorrow as the lives of innocent people were lost. That is what is similar between the death of the man responsible for the Brooklyn Bridge, John A. Roebling and the Stampede of 1883. Another similarity is that both of these events could’ve been prevented. The death of Roebling could’ve been prevented if he would’ve never been out on the work site as he was not a construction worker. The stampede could’ve also been prevented if P.T Barnum would’ve been allowed to perform his elephant march. Let’s move on to what differentiates both of these accounts. The death of Roebling was cause by machinery and unawareness of his surroundings while the deaths of the stampede were cause by human beings trampling others to death. Another difference is the after math, after Roebling died, his son and other workers also died constructing the Brooklyn Bridge while a year after the stampede, P.T Barnum was able to perform his march to prevent such event from happening again[5].

Now history can be defined as an argument on how we interpret the past[6]. This mean that many people view these accounts different as they can be viewed differently. Although both of these stories that revolve around the bridge are tragedies, they are also controversial and occurred through different events. One had a positive aftermath while another resulted in more deaths. They are distinct but also similar at the same time. It can be an example of how history can be found in years after an event occurred no matter how different or indifferent they may seem to be.


[1] “Today in History.” : June 12. N.p., n.d. Web. 24 Nov. 2013.

[2] “John Augustus Roebling (American Engineer).” Encyclopedia Britannica Online. Encyclopedia Britannica, n.d. Web. 24 Nov. 2013.

[3] “Ephemeral New York.” Ephemeral New York. N.p., n.d. Web. 24 Nov. 2013.

[4] “Topics in Chronicling America – Brooklyn Bridge; Fanfare and Fatalities.” Brooklyn Bridge; Fanfare and Fatalities. N.p., n.d. Web. 24 Nov. 2013.

[5] “Ephemeral New York.” Ephemeral New York. N.p., n.d. Web. 24 Nov. 2013.

[6] Geoffrey, Zylstra, 2013, New York City College of Technology

Second draft of Project 4- “The Historical History Behind The Brooklyn Bridge”

 

The Brooklyn Bridge, completed in 1883, was a crowning achievement in New York City history. The bridge has placed itself as a National Historic Landmark by the National Park Service and a New York City Landmark by the Landmarks Preservation Commission. The Brooklyn Bridge was the first bridge in history to connect Manhattan and Brooklyn. It took fourteen years to build the bridge which cost close to fifteen million dollars. The Brooklyn Bridge is regarded as the “Eighth Wonder of the World” and is a top attraction for tourists visiting New York City. The bridge spans the East River between Brooklyn and Manhattan and stretches for a length of 5989 feet(about 1.8 km). The span measures 1595.5 feet. The bridge was  the world’s largest suspension bridge for some credible amount of time.

John A. Roebling was a civil engineer who designed the Brooklyn Bridge in the early 1800’s. Even though he came up with the design he never got to see the bridge because he died after crushing his foot in an accident on the bridge.  Roebling learned how to build suspension bridges, like the Brooklyn Bridge, when he was trained as an engineer at Berlin’s Royal Polytechnic Institute. In 1866 a company called “The New York Bridge Company” was founded and they hired John as a chief engineer. He planned the Manhattan and Brooklyn Bridge, as they called it at the time and told them to make the bridge with newly available steel wire, which would allow the bridge to be larger, stronger, and longer than any bridge to be built yet. He was not the only one that died during the construction in total twenty people died during the construction. When John died his son Washington Roebling took after the leadership of the plan of the bridge. Unfortunately though, while working on the pillars of the bridge, he suffered from caisson-disease and was on his deathbed on the day of the opening of the Brooklyn Bridge.

The Brooklyn Bridge was a necessity and in demand during the early 1800’s in New York City, because the vastly populated Manhattan which housed 400,000 residents, twice as many residents as there are today. The resolution to this predicament was the development of the Bridge, the Brooklyn Bridge. People and goods who commuted between the boroughs of Manhattan and Brooklyn could cross the East River quickly, regardless of weather conditions or any other once interfering circumstances. This was not the first time building a bridge over the East River was discussed, it was talked about as long as anyone could remember, but nothing was executed until the 1800‘s.The bridge had two central purposes which were to bear the weight of four immense cables, and they would hold both the cables and the roadway of the bridge high enough so they would not interfere with traffic on the river. The bridge was designed to have a load capacity of 18,700 tons. They designed two elevated railroad tracks, which were connected to elevated railroad systems in New York and Brooklyn, down to the center of the bridge. On the other side, they designed four lanes, two lanes on two outer roadways. To be used for carriages and horseback riders. Right over the track they provided an elevated promenade for pedestrians and bicyclists. After 15 years it helped unite Brooklyn and Manhattan, Queens, Bronx, and Staten Island to form a larger New York. When the Brooklyn Bridge first opened, it cost a penny to cross by foot, 5 cents for a horse and rider and 10 cents for a horse and wagon.    The Brooklyn Bridge served as an important landmark for New York City and added character. It allowed people to travel from Brooklyn to Manhattan in a very fast and convenient way. It allowed Manhattan to be a very attracted tourist area and as well Brooklyn. It allowed cars, horses, carriages, etc. to travel using the bridge at a cheap rate at the time. The footpath of the bridge allowed you to cross the river in peace by not being bothered by the traffic on the lower life and also offered a great view of the downtown Manhattan Skyline.

The Brooklyn Bridge was the longest suspension bridge in the world at some reputable time. . The bridge spans the East River between Brooklyn and Manhattan and stretches for a length of 5989 feet about 1.8 km. The bridge remained the longest suspension until 1903 when the Williamsburg Bridge overhauls it by 4.5 feet. On May 24, 1883, the opening ceremony of the bridge was described as “the greatest gala day in the history of that moral suburb. The wife of John A.Roebling was given the first ride over the bridge which represented a symbol of victory for her. As soon as the bridge opened 150,000 people poured the bridge. It carried trolley lines, horse-drawn vehicles, and livestock on its opening day. A week after the bridge opened a tragic attack happened on Memorial Day, 20,000 people died in a panic attack which said that the bridge was about to collapse. The bridge inspired more art than another other man-made structure in the United States. The towers of the bridge made the bridge become a national monument in 1964.

The Brooklyn Bridge, completed in 1883, was a crowning achievement in New York City history. The Brooklyn Bridge has many historical values behind it and serves an important factor for people back then. It allowed them to get from Manhattan and Brooklyn in a beneficial way. It was more expensive to use the bridge then it was today. Today the bridge is free to use thanks to New York Mayor William J. Gaynor in 1911, when he said, “I see no more reason for toll gates on the bridges than for toll gates on Fifth Avenue or Broadway.”  There are an immense amount of bridges that are free today but the Brooklyn Bridge is the most convenient one to use because it offers numerous features that are very useful compared to other bridges. The Brooklyn Bridge will always an everlasting change for NYC it led to many great achievements and modifications.

“Brooklyn Bridge.” Brooklyn Bridge. N.p., n.d. Web. 19 Nov. 2013. <http://www.nycroads.com/crossings/brooklyn/>.

“Brooklyn Bridge.” , New York City. N.p., n.d. Web. 19 Nov. 2013. <http://www.aviewoncities.com/nyc/brooklynbridge.htm>.

“Today in History.” : June 12. N.p., n.d. Web. 19 Nov. 2013. <http://memory.loc.gov/ammem/today/jun12.html>.

“Infrastructure.” NYC DOT. N.p., n.d. Web. 18 Nov. 2013. <http://www.nyc.gov/html/dot/html/infrastructure/brooklyn-bridge.shtml>.

“10 Things You May Not Know About the Brooklyn Bridge.” History.com. A&E Television Networks, 23 May 2013. Web. 18 Nov. 2013. <http://www.history.com/news/10-things-you-may-not-know-about-the-brooklyn-bridge>.

honeycombed

(verb)

Definition: to penetrate into every part

source: http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/honeycombed?show=0&t=1387316276

“Waterfront: A Walk Around Manhattan”:

“Three-quarters of the way across the bridge I saw the skyscrapers in the deepening darkness become slowly honeycombed with lights until, before I reach the Manhattan end…”

I understand where is the vantage point from author, how the darkness join to the light, the city become glorious.

 

serpentine

(adjective)

Definition: of or resembling a serpent (as in form or movement); having many bends and turns

source: http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/serpentine

from the article “Waterfront: A Walk Around Manhattan”:
“the haunting shadow of the bridge on water; the serpentine plunge of the span’s railing, like a roller coaster descending into the high-rise city.”

I understand the vantage point from the author, which the bridge is like the shape of serpent, with many bends and cross the water.

apocalyptic

(Adjective)

Definition:of or relating to the end of the world

Source: http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/apocalyptic?show=0&t=1387310339

From Philip Lopate’s Waterfront:A Walk Around Manhattan:
“compared the structure to a dinosaur, one of thous’huge giant lizards’ from which future geologists could re-create out world, and whose bones alone would survive the apocalyptic twentieth century.”

I understand the author want to say that the structure of Brooklyn Bridge is strong, huge and will be last forever, to the end of the twentieth century

grotesque

(Adjective)

Definition: very strange or ugly in a way that is not normal or natural

source: http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/grotesque

“How to Tell a True War Story” from Tim O’Brien’s The Things They Carried:
“it can be argued, for in stance, that war is grotesque. But in truth war is also beauty.”

I understand O’Brien said that war is ugly, this is a common sense for all the people (who had not been in the war); however, for the soldiers who witness the war, they understand the beauty, like O’Brien use beautiful words to describe the death of Lemon. For them, this is the truth.

raucous

(Adjective)

Definition:loud and unpleasant to listen to

source: http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/raucous?show=0&t=1387307982

“Reading Lucy”: “In the first day without her raucous writing voice and her panoramic gaze, I felt a little lost.”

I understand that Egan really like Lucy,her characteristic and her life, she cannot stop reading letter and understand her “friend”, even though Lucy’s writing is kind of noisy and most of the people will unpleasant to listen.

Retention

Noun

Definition: the ability to keep something

Prof. Rosen used this word during English class on the 16th of October.

I now know that Prof. Rosen was talking about remembering information when she said the word “retention.”

Source: http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/retention?show=0&t=1387162495