Author Archives: Joseph Corniel

Dumbo before it was Dumbo

At first I was quite hesitant towards this project, I wasn’t really sure if I was going to be able to go through with it until Monday rolled on in and Prof. Rosen had said we could take a stroll along our “campus” which she considers to be the area around the school for our project ideas. Shortly thereafter I had gone carelessly roaming around until I found myself in the streets of Dumbo, 68 jay streets to be exact. Then and there I decided to write about a factory looking building which is now an apartment building. This particular building stuck out to me because its design looked as if it was from the late 1930’s and it also had two platforms for water towers, but those were removed because they weren’t up there. The story I felt this building was communicating to me was although everything around you may change and things aren’t as original as they once were you have to remain the original you. Three passages I found in “city limits,” by colson whitehead which support my overlap story is in paragraph #2 when he says “You are a new Yorker when what was there before is more real and solid than what is there now”. As you can see the building is a part of the past but it’s still there which makes it realer than what we’ll ever know. Another passage is on the fourth paragraph where it says “I still call it the pan Am building, not out of affectation, but because that’s what it is. As I said the original can’t change.

I just wanna be me

Joseph Corniel                                                                                  9/27/2017

English project #1

 

 

I Just Want to Be Me

 

 

 

 

 

 

For the last four years, as a high school student I had one goal in mind: graduate and as a

 

Graduate I was looking ahead to college and my future. How did I achieve that goal? I had made

 

A plan when I entered high school, followed that plan, and in the end, was successful. Before

 

Entering college, or now that I’m in college there are specific goals that I’ve set to get on track

 

Toward success.

 

  • Excel in my Academics: From my past experience in high school I’ve figured out that my freshman year sets the tone for the next four years and with the job market as competitive as today, GPA’s are important. It’s just not enough to have a college degree; you need to be committed to excellence.

Focus on My Health: In the past, my mother worried about my health. But now that I’m in college, I’m responsible for taking care of myself. Eat right, get rest, and take vitamins and exercise. This won’t only contribute to my overall health, but it will also help concentrate and excel in class.

 

  • Learn to Self-advocate: My mother didn’t come to college with me. So she can’t fight my battles any longer. College is a time for me to begin advocating for myself. Speak up let my requests be know, and handle my conflicts like an adult. Starting self-advocacy in college will make my life easier and help me move towards independence.

 

Financial Goals:

 

Before college, I was relying on my mother so that she can help me meet my financial needs. But now that I work and go to school not only an I responsible for my own financial needs but I’m also in charge of managing my own money.

 

  • Don’t get into debit: I’ve heard from a lot of people that it’s very easy to get into debt. Credit card offers abound once you start college. Most students graduate college with thousands of dollars of credit card debit. So going to do myself a favor and use debit cards because credit cards require a payment every month, and I don’t have that type of cash.

 

  • Borrow only what I need: I know in my case it’s tempting to borrow as much money as much money as student loans will allow. I know college students usually borrow money for tuition and other college expenses, entertainment, etc. But I hope I don’t fall into this trap. I want to be a smart student loan borrower

 

  • Work: It can teach accountability and can help me supplement funds I earn and help give me a limit on the money I borrow. Work can also bring valuable networking opportunities.

 

Career Goals: It’s best to begin setting career goals in college. When graduation comes along, I’ll be ready to jump into the job market, setting myself apart from other unprepared graduates.

 

  • Career: Try to learn all I can about my future career path. Talk to professionals in the field when I get an opportunity and if they’re inspirational shadow them if possible, and make a connection with my career center here at city tech.

 

Now if your take a look at my avatar on my profile it’s a picture of a saying by Julius Caesar which means I came, I saw, I conquered. Every time I become weary or unmotivated that’s what  keeps me going because basically the majority of my life that’s what I’ve been doing. Since a child ive had to learn from my errors and rebuild whatever it is that I may have knocked down and the same way that I’ve conquered my other obstacles I will come and see the next obstacles and conquer it as well.

Statue Of Limitations

Joseph Corniel10/7/17

Project #2

 

 

 

If there was a monument to be placed somewhere, it should be a person who has made a difference in society and also continues to do so today by inspiring others with his or her past actions. There are four criteria’s which I have made that should be considered for use when placing a monument and those criteria’s are How do people portray this monument today? How important is this person to our history? How did this person use the position he or she was in to help others around them? Did this person have a positive impact on society? If so what did he or she do to make that positive impact possible?

There are many historic figures that we as a people memorialize today an example of one of those people is Henry Ward Beecher. He was a 19th-century minister, preacher, and social reformer who supported abolition and women’s suffrage. He was the brother of an author as well named Harriet Beecher Stowe. He is memorialized because he represented the most popular and lovable strain of American culture also, mainstream Christianity is so infused with the eloquence of Christ’s love that the majority of American’s cannot imagine anything else, and  have no memory of the revolution fought by Beecher and his noblemen. Beecher is also, memorialized in New York for being a Congregationalist preacher, who emphasized god’s love rather than his punishment. He also used his position as a social reformer and minister to urge churchgoers to buy freedom for enslaved individuals.

Now I selected these four points for my criteria because if there was to be a monument placed, it should be a person that has made a difference in society and also continues to do so today by inspiring others with his or her past actions. An example of Beecher inspiring others can be found in the new world encyclopedia website, where it says “During the American civil war, Beecher’s church had raised and equipped a volunteer infantry regiment. Early in the war Beecher also, pressed President Lincoln to emancipate slaves through a proclamation. The preacher later went on a speaking tour in England to undermine support for the south by explaining the North’s war aims. Near the end of the war, when the stars and stripes were again raised at fort Sumter in North Carolina, Beecher was the main speaker.” This shows how Beecher inspired others because he had his whole church congregation on his side ready to fight at all costs. Beecher also, got Abraham Lincoln on his side and because of this today we have what  we call the emancipation proclamation which reads “all persons held as slaves within any state or designated part of a state, the people whereof shall then be in rebellion against the united states, shall be then, thenceforward, and be forever free.” So as you can see Henry Ward Beecher was a very important person in our history and plays a major part in the abolition movement. Today you can find a monument of Henry Ward Beecher in Columbus Park in the civic center of downtown Brooklyn, this monument was created by John Quincy Adams ward, and was unveiled on June 24th, 1891. Beecher is seen as hero in today society and is memorialized because he was one of the men that was noble enough to stand up against all opposes even when others did not see his bigger picture.

 

Many people are memorialized for many different reasons some are remembered for their heroic acts throughout history others are remembered for their injustices to society for example a heroic monument in New York would be the statue of Gandhi at the south west corner of union Square Park. Another example is the Christopher Columbus statue on 59th street but as of lately it’s in the process of removal because of the controversy surrounding the sculpture. Citizens didn’t think that Christopher Columbus was such a heroic figure due to the fact that he pillaged villages and killed innocent people for riches and on top of that had the guts to brag about it in his journal entries pretty psycho if you ask me. But what are the criteria behind the removal of a statue? What are the standards it’s held by to make it a statue in the first place? Well as I found through researching there is no criteria for them when being taken down what people are doing is basically applying modern standards to past behavior and that’ll lead to a distorted understanding of history. Plus, history itself rarely provides an easy to digest narrative. Most heroes often have a little villainy in their past.