This week at my internship I’m still doing the St patrick’s video but the designer told me that the footage I used was not the one he wanted because they were shot in different frames per second. He did not tell me he did not want them mixed. so now I had to create a new montage with the specification he wanted. I had asked him before I started putting it together and he just said pick the ones that look cool and seem to flow. Sometime the lack of info and specification has to be more clear even if you had already asked questions. The senior designer has to be more specific because its just double to work for me and I have other assignments to do also.
I am also still continuing the bridge series logo. It has already gone through at least 15 different variations. These guys are really indecisive. They say they like one thing then when I think I got the definitive one they decide to change it for no reason. When I asked them what is the reason they just respond with I don’t know I just don’t feel it. Even after I gave my reasons for choosing the design I chose and its significance of what I think the logo should embody. Hopefully they agree on something with the next batch of variations I do. I also got an emergency design to do. I got a single cover to do for some artist named Rawyals. I’ve never heard of them. Its a girls rap group but they sound like any other rap group out there. I don’t find anything interesting or unique about them, but I digress I have to sketch up some ideas for next week and they gave me the song I have to the cover on. Its called “King Me”. Lets see how it goes next week.
Dear Humberto,
Your writing is generally clear. However, I strongly suggest you write shorter, more concise sentences.
Here’s an example:
The senior designer has to be more specific because its just double to work for me and I have other assignments to do also.
Here’s my suggested edit:
The senior designer has to be more specific because it doubles my work and I have other assignments.
There are quite a few other sentences you’ve written that would benefit from editing. Again, bring in hard copy and I’d be pleased to review it with you.
Sincerely,
Professor Mason