Writing to Calculate: Ideas for Incorporating Writing into Math Coursework

Estes (1989), in his discussion of the importance of writing in math, refers to writing as a “thinking clarifier,” in that the act of writing out a concept requires understanding that concept. This understanding may even occur in the sometimes painful process of getting a few complete sentences typed out. Unfortunately, though, “a major concern with writing projects in mathematics (and other courses as well) is that they often feel tacked on and artificial” write Parker and Mattison (2010: 47).  “The paper is something they had to do in order to receive ‘writing credit’ for a course. It’s a game and everyone is playing along” (38). Most of us—students, math faculty, and non-math faculty, can relate to this opinion, or recognize it.

Parker and Mattison astutely describe this discrepancy in attitudes toward writing, from one discipline to another, as being—in the case of math—the difference between “writing about math,” which often comes in the form of an assigned paper on a mathematician, and “writing math,” which is actually writing on math content concepts, to facilitate their absorption. Luckily, there are a number of ways to incorporate writing into the math curriculum, that are not only painless, but productive and purposeful as well. For example, they suggest a “textbook writing assignment,” which requires students to write out the mathematical equations they learn in textbook style, and also to explain why the equations are the way they are. By having students write out textbook chapters that will be distributed to the rest of the class, by way of making study materials for everyone, in this example, students are given a clear audience, beyond the professor, and an opportunity to uncover any difficulties they may be having with the material.

Alternatively, there are ways for math professors to incorporate less formal (more lower-stakes) math writing assignments, or instead to incorporate more writing into exams, and therefore into exam study guides. As Estes points out, including short-answer questions on exams need not merely be traditional math “word problems,” which are limited to a short section of the algebra curriculum. In other words, asking students to write out concepts taught, a step beyond only writing out the equations numerically, is beneficial for exams and for exercises to practice for the exams. Estes’ example prompt is as follows: “If two variables have a correlation coefficient of -0.98, explain the meanings of the negative sign and the absolute value of 0.98” (12).

While the non-mathematician reader may need to leave the details of this example aside, it is a helpful illustration of how such word problems may apply to other non-Humanities fields. For example, in my social science field, linguistics, I assign language datasets to my students, and when students volunteer a correct solution in class, I am usually obligated to ask, “and how do you know?” While our students often get the correct answer by calculating it, at other times they arrive at the answer by guessing, or—perhaps more common—by erroneously using incorrect reasoning that accidentally led them to the correct answer. We all know that this will not help them with similar questions in the future. So, this act of explaining out loud how the answer was determined is something we can all apply to our own classes. A parallel example to Estes’ (above) in my own linguistic coursework could be:

Question 1: “For the two morphemes below, identify which morpheme is inflectional and which is derivational.”

Question 2: “For the next two morphemes, explain why morpheme A is inflectional, and why morpheme B is derivational.”

My exams and assignments usually do include a “what is your evidence” question, but asking students to write this evidence out, in prose, is taking the process of writing to learn one step further.

For additional convincing and thought-provoking evidence that it is beneficial to integrate prose into math, Estes also describes an elementary math class lesson plan on fractions, in which the teacher starts with a sentence like “half of ten is five,” then replaces the numbers with digits, “half of 10 is 5,” then the remaining words with symbols, “½ x 10 = 5,” showing that the equal sign functions like the verb “to be,” and so on.

Another idea is to come up with reasons for mathematical concepts that students may not know. For example, Strogatz (2014: 287) describes the light bulbs that go off when he explains that the term “rational number” is so named for fractions like ¾ because that number is a ratio of whole numbers. He also finds it helpful to explain that “squaring” a number is so named because the results can fit in a square, like the number nine, illustrated below:

Without being able to predict exactly what would work for math professors here at City Tech, I imagine that, when I was a student in an introductory math class, I would have greatly appreciated answering an exam question such as, “Write out the meaning of and reason behind the term ‘to square a number.’ Feel free to provide examples and drawings to make your answer clear.”

What kinds of “word problems” do you use in your various disciplines?

 

References

Estes, Paul L. (June 1989). Writing across the mathematics curriculum. Writing across the Curriculum. 10–16.

Parker, Adam, and Mattison, Michael. (November 2010). The WAC Journal, 21. 37–51.

Strogatz, Steven. (March 2014). Writing about math for the perplexed and the Traumatized. Notices of the AMS, 61, 3. 286–291.

Tailoring Expectations

One useful perspective-realignment I’ve found useful raising to faculty, particularly those who don’t teach strictly “English,” is the that many assignments have implicit writing assumptions which must be made explicit.  It is difficult sometimes to see the necessity of writing underlying even ostensibly non-“expressive,” or technical, assignments.  This sounds like an easy, or superficial suggestion, but consider, for instance, courses which integrate design and writing in an integrative and mutually-informing manner — in order to produce any sort of finished, visually appealing document, the writing present within must be coherent and “finished;” yet, this expectation is often only alluded to tacitly.  Further, even if one is actively grading “writing,” it is often difficult to break down this “writing” requirement into constitutive units the students can follow, or knowingly deal with on an individual, then total, basis. As an added benefit, when students are made more conscious about articulation, even in a small way regarding a tangible quality of writing, it makes them more aware of the total flow and logic of their work.  (These tangible qualities are then able to compound, and inform one another.)

One possible suggestion:  Perhaps (even as a sort of pedagogical thought experiment), try outlining one or two explicit qualities of writing to be graded, or paid attention to, in a non explicitly English or even humanities assignment.  As we often discuss at WAC, try to scaffold, or otherwise anticipate the exact skill you would like them to exercise by introducing it earlier than the exact moment you wish them to recall or produce it.  Then, see if, for example, should you ask them to pay attention to something like topic sentences, or even choosing neutral, or discipline-specific jargon for the assignment, whether the overall clarity of thought, and quality of product produced, improves.

This means of “tailoring” expectations, or honing in on required, but implicit, qualities of writing in assignments, is also transferable to other areas, such as peer review.  Rather than asking students to holistically grade entire documents for “quality” or “followability,” try to hone in on two or three qualities (perhaps even breaking a “thesis” question down into a subcategory or two), and set firmly-defined timelines for how long students spend on each portion.  This means of narrowing the scope of the students’ attention will likely improve the sharpness and nuance of the skills paid attention to, and overall improve the logic, thinking, and argument of the writing, and writing-reliant aptitudes, required.

Writing to Learn

As the fall semester of 2013 draws to a close, it is useful to reflect on what we have accomplished over the course of the semester. We the Writing Across the Curriculum fellows have led three main faculty workshops since September: Effective Assignment Design, Peer Review, and Effective Grading. Despite the three varied topics of these workshops, they share a common thread, which is the WAC philosophy of “writing to learn,” and in addition, their content overlaps nicely.

In order to highlight WAC principles, I wish to focus on one particular aspect of the effective grading strategies that Jake Cohen and I discussed in our workshop on Tuesday, December 12 (the last of the semester). We went over some techniques to improve student writing and work, most of which also incidentally result in reduced grading time, which is always welcome, especially at this end-of-semester crunch grading time. To view our workshop slides, please click here, and check out the handout. (You can also visit this page to download documents from all of our workshops.) We discussed minimal marking, supportive responding when writing comments on student papers, rubrics, and planning assignments ahead of time to make grading more efficient. This last category is closely related to the two previous workshops from this semester: assignment design, clearly, and also peer review, in that having students assess each others’ work can save time, and greatly improve student writing.

This assignment design category is also the “one particular aspect” that I choose to elaborate on for this post. Among the several techniques we suggested for planning ahead to make assignments more “gradable,” one sticks out as being particularly WAC-esque: the uncollected writing assignment. The value of this notion, which is generally under-utilized by faculty in all departments, is two-fold: It is easy to see how uncollected assignments decrease the overall amount of time we spend grading work, of course, but why assign them at all? The answer lies in the foundation of WAC philosophy, which is that people learn by doing—and more specifically, by writing. So, what kind of uncollected writing do we recommend you assign, how do you enforce such assignments without collecting them, and, finally, how do students “learn by writing”?

One of the best illustrations of this concept is provided eloquently by Toby Fulwiler in “Why We Teach Writing in the First Place”: “Writing the thought on paper objectifie[s] the thought in the world… [which] even happens when I write out a grocery list—when I write down ‘eggs’ I quickly see that I also need ‘bacon.’ And so on” (127). This concept works well for professors across the curricula: Think about assigning a five-minute, in-class free-write asking students to describe course content covered in the past month/week/hour, by way of ensuring that they can articulate it well for whatever type of exam they have coming up, and by way of allowing them to discover holes in their understanding of what you have covered so far. If you are concerned that they won’t oblige the assignment without the potential for reward, then you can choose, for example, to select three at random to read aloud in class, or to be posted on your Blackboard/OpenLab page that same evening.

We hope that those who incorporate this technique will ultimately find that the grading process of the final papers you assign will be ameliorated, in that the students have now had a chance to “practice” or “train” for the final writing process, something akin to athletes who could never run a marathon without similar training, without you having been required to grade an intermediary draft. Ideally, as students come across “holes” in their own comprehension of your course content, they may come to you with more questions, or make better use of your office hours. I know that they will arrive at a deeper understanding of your course material in the same way that I have done regarding WAC philosophy, in the process of writing out this blog post.

Happy Holidays!

WAC Highlight: Professor Mary Sue Donsky

Course: LAW 2301 Estates, Trusts and Wills

Course Link: https://openlab.citytech.cuny.edu/groups/estates-trusts-and-wills/

Assignment: Field-Based Collaborative Research Assignment

In this assignment, students visited an African burial ground at 290 Broadway.   They researched the distribution and ownership of property under the laws of early New York.  Students attended a lecture by a National Park Ranger and read the site brochure as well as two wills.

Assignment Link: https://openlab.citytech.cuny.edu/donskylaw2301/assignments/

What WAC principle(s) does this assignment exemplify?
This assignment puts into action writing to learn principles by requiring both an individual response to the site visit and readings in the form of a legal memo, as well as a group wiki post and oral presentation.  This assignment employs scaffolding as the individual response then allows for effective group collaboration.  The online writing also supports the oral presentation component, which may be seen as the high-stakes aspect of the assignment.

How might this type of assignment be used in other courses across the curriculum?

Other courses may similarly design a visit to a New York site and provide the opportunity for students to engage with primary research sources.  Further, a wiki post is an excellent format for students to present group writing in and provides the opportunity for students to comment online and to show their work outside of class.

WAC Highlight: Professor Peter Catapano

Course: HIS 3208 – History of Immigration, Ethnicity, and Nativism

Course Link: https://openlab.citytech.cuny.edu/catapanohis3208/

Assignment: Hester Street
In this assignment, students watched the 1975 film Hester Street, in which a Russian Jewish immigrant in NYC’s Lower East Side shakes his ethnic roots for a more Americanized version of himself, leading to family turmoil and strife. Students were given a set of questions to answer as they watched the film. They were also required to post a paragraph-long response on the course blog in the OpenLab which had more questions such as whether or not the film could be considered a feminist film due to its strong female leads..

Assignment Link: https://openlab.citytech.cuny.edu/catapanohis3208/2013/03/06/hester-street/#comments

What WAC principle(s) does this assignment exemplify?
By asking students to respond to directed questions where they had to analyze the underlying themes of the film, this assignment lays the groundwork for later assignments that may require a thesis statement in a larger research paper. For example, the role of Hester Street as a feminist film could be used as a jumping point for a larger research project in which other contemporaneous (or not) films are analyzed in that light as well. Secondly, these short assignments allow students to write less formally while simultaneously thinking critically about the film they watched. These kind of assignments lend themselves to strong discussions in class and on the course blog.

How might this type of assignment be used in other courses across the curriculum?
By structuring assignments that ask students to critically think about its theoretical/conceptual significance in an informal setting allows for fruitful discussion where students explain (and sometimes defend) their interpretations. This makes the process of writing a formal, thesis-driven assignment more accessible to the student while at the same time giving them ownership of their ideas throughout the writing process.

WAC Highlight: Professor Lynn Gernert

Today, we would like to highlight Professor Gernert’s writing assignment as an example of effective writing assignment design. The assignment was given to students in ARCH 2321 (History of Architecture: 1900 – Now).

What immediately stands out is the learning value of the assignment itself. By asking students to reflect on the readings assigned for the week and providing them with questions that encourage thoughtful and structured responses, the assignment engages students with the material and encourages critical thinking.

Note also how the tasks communicate clearly what the students are expected to do. This is achieved by use of precise action verbs: Describe… trace the changes… Provide examples… Describe and analyze…

Option 1 also provides students with a question that encourages a comprehensive and structured response: “Who were the significant people and what art, cultural movements and technology influenced them?” Option 2 gives a thesis which writers must develop and support. Both of these strategies provide students with a frame within which they can develop and structure their ideas.

In addition, this assignment clearly communicates all the basic requirements to eliminate any guesswork on the part of the student, such as length, format, due date, and where the readings can be found.

It should also be noted that this assignment is the third in a series of assignment leading up to the final research paper in which students are required to develop and support their own thesis. As such, it is an excellent example of scaffolding approach: students learn to support a thesis and present their argument in a well-structured form before embarking on a more challenging task of developing their own thesis and selecting supporting evidence from secondary sources.

WAC Highlight: Professors Masuda and Zia

Today’s WAC-friendly highlighted assignment

Professors: Ariane Masuda and Farrukh Zia

Course: MAT 1275/6523 and EMT 1150/9402 Learning Community

Assignment: Visit the Sony Wonder Lab and reflect on math and circuitry

Together, the class visited the Sony Wonder Lab and looked at the various exhibits there.  Beforehand, they had been informed that they would be embarking on a research project related to one of these exhibits, so the students knew that they should be keeping an eye out for things they found particularly interesting and taking notes.

After their visit, the students were asked to do research into the exhibit of their choice, to investigate what the technology in the exhibit was capable of, how it works, and the ways circuitry and mathematics were employed to create it.  Finally, they were asked to write up what they had found as a technical article to be published on Citytech OpenLab web site to encourage fellow students to visit the Sony Lab and learn about technology through the exhibit the student had chosen.

What WAC principle(s) does this assignment exemplify?

This assignment touches on a number of WAC principles:

1)  It got students out of the classroom, investigating sophisticated, exciting applications of their coursework in math and circuitry.

2)  It also contains elements of writing to learn, as the students were encouraged to reflect on the connections between their coursework and the applications they found in the Sony Lab without worrying about getting the answer right.

2)  It encourages the students to write for a particular audience — their peers — in a specific format — a technical article.   This helps clarify the tone and allows students to practice particular kinds of writing.

3)  It was a detailed assignment, in which every step was carefully spelled out and the expectations of the professors were made very clear.

How might this type of assignment be used in other courses across the curriculum?

Assignments like this could be useful in a variety of courses.  Students may at times struggle to see the applications of their course work, leaving them feeling like they are working hard toward an unclear goal.  Connecting students with real applications of their work and encouraging them to reflect on that in written form is great practice.

Moreover, specifying other students as the intended audience — and asking the students in the course to encourage these other students to get out and see real applications of the work they are doing and how exciting they can be — is a great way to get students writing about the important and interesting applications of the courses they are taking.

WAC Highlight: Kurt Vonnegut

The following blog post is based on an assignment found on the website Slate.com, reprinted from Kurt Vonnegut: Letters, edited by Dan Wakefield and published in October of 2012 by Delacorte Press.

 Professor: Kurt Vonnegut

Course:  Taught in 1965 at the Iowa Writers’ Workshop, Vonnegut says, “This course began as Form and Theory of Fiction, became Form of Fiction, then Form and Texture of Fiction, then Surface Criticism, or How to Talk out of the Corner of Your Mouth Like a Real Tough Pro.”

 Assignment: Term Paper

After having read a collection of 15 short stories, Vonnegut asked students to create their own table of contents for the book, giving each story a grade from A to F based on their enjoyment of the story. Students were then asked to pretend to be an editor at a literary magazine that is considering publishing 6 of the stories. He asks students to write a letter to their imaginary boss in which they argue for the publication of 3 stories that pleased them the most, and against the 3 that pleased them the least.

What WAC principles does this assignment exemplify?

First, this is a highly original and unusual assignment. As such, it has plagiarism prevention built into its design, as students would be hard pressed to find resources to copy from. Furthermore, the personal nature of the writing discourages cheating, as individual student perspective and voice are central to the assignment, rather than traditional models which privilege reiterating the ‘facts.’ Second, students are being invited to participate in a sophisticated level of academic discourse and analysis used by professionals in their field, i.e. editors, but in a way that is accessible to novices. Lastly, students are writing in a way that involves them in an ongoing and open ended critical conversation about literature. The assignment promotes critical thinking by having students engage with the texts in a way that forces them to reflect on how the stories make them feel, and argue convincingly based on that feeling. They will have to make strong connections between their own unique visceral, impressionistic responses to the stories and the particular elements of the stories that affected them in such a way, and out of this relationship craft an original argument.

How might this type of assignment be used in other courses across the curriculum?

An assignment like this could be used across the curriculum to engage students in drawing on their personal experience with a text, idea, concept, lab experiment, film, design, compute program, etc… and developing a sophisticated argument grounded in that experience. Students could write similar reviews of architectural designs and structures for an imaginary magazine; they could review dental hygiene technology or practices; students could argue for or against philosophers being included in a philosophy course syllabus.

WAC Highlight: Professor Karen Goodlad (HMGT 2402)

This week’s WAC-friendly highlighted assignment

Professor: Karen Goodlad

Course: HMGT 2401: Wine & Beverage Management

Assignment: Visit and critique a wine retail store

Students were asked to visit a wine store and review specific aspects of the store in a 1½ to 2-page report.  The report had to include whether or not the store’s layout was organized in a customer-friendly manner, whether wines were organized by region of origin, the price range of wines on sale, as well whether the store was offering any promotions.  Students were also required to provide an evaluation of the store by suggesting some improvements the store could make in the future.

What WAC principle(s) does this assignment exemplify?

This assignment asks students to apply topics and concepts they cover in class and apply them to the real world.  It also requires students use their analytical thinking skills by asking students to propose improvements the store could make in order to be more successful.  This kind of writing assignment goes beyond asking students to describe the store.  It makes them think about how and why the store is set up a certain way, as well as think about the degree to which particular setup is effective.  Professor Goodlad’s students took the opportunity to provide the stores they visited with helpful critiques in their essays.  Some students suggested that their stores expand because the space felt cramped, while others applauded their stores’ regional and international selections and knowledgeable/friendly staffs.  The students presented lucid descriptions as well as helpful and practical evaluations and suggestions.

Students posted their assignments to the course’s OpenLab site, allowing for potential discussion about their assignments further down the road.  Such discourse is helpful because it provides potential for meaningful interaction with and clarification/elaboration by the author.

How might this type of assignment be used in other courses across the curriculum?

Applying course concepts to real world situations and subsequently evaluating them can be beneficial in almost any course.  Assignments such as this allow students to see how their course content can be useful for them apart from the academy, which is where the majority of them will spend their careers.  Such assignments would be particularly useful in more theoretical classes where the course content is ephemeral or abstract.  Affording students the opportunity to conduct an assignment similar to Professor Goodlad’s would help students interact substantively with potentially abstract course material.

WAC Highlight: Professor Leonard; Professor Smale (LIB 1201)

This week’s WAC-friendly highlighted assignment
Professor: Anne Leonard; original assignment design by Maura Smale
Course: LIB 1201 – Research & Documentation for the Information AgeFall 2012
Assignment: Course Blogging

Professor Leonard requires students to write a minimum of 20 posts of at least 100 words each for their class blog. She divides blog posts into several types, some linked to specific stages of the course.

 Reading response (posts from 8/29-11/19; see syllabus for details):

Write a blog post discussing one of the readings assigned for the class. Identify a topic or theme from the reading, briefly summarize it, and analyze it in relation to other readings and themes in the course. Does this reading raise any questions in your mind?

Research journal (posts from 10/29-11/14; see syllabus for details):

Write a blog post discussing and documenting your process and progress on the research paper for this course. You may write about any aspect of this process, for example: deciding on a research topic, finding sources, writing the proposal/annotated bibliography/paper, etc. What have you found difficult or frustrating about this process? What successful strategies have you used?

Blog comment (throughout the semester; see syllabus for details):

Select a blog post by one of your classmates and write a response to her/his post. What other perspectives on this topic can you offer? How does the blog post connect to the course readings and themes? Comments must also be a minimum of 100 words.

 What WAC principle(s) does this assignment exemplify?

Professor Leonard’s blog assignments engage students with course content deeply and meaningfully and are excellent examples of informal “writing to learn” and “exploratory writing” assignments. “Reading response” assignments  encourage students to identify key ideas of the text while at the same time teaching the difference between summary and analysis, thus promoting critical thinking and reading skills. “Research journal” assignments offer students an opportunity to reflect on and evaluate their research strategies and articulate questions and difficulties early in the research process. In addition, Professor Leonard encourages students use the blog to explore ideas that they may wish to develop more fully in their research papers, thus encouraging the view of writing as a multi-stage process and providing opportunity to receive feedback.

How might this type of assignment be used in other courses across the curriculum?

Informal writing assignments asking students to identify and summarize a text or reflect on and describe various stages of a project can be used in courses in any discipline. Requiring students to post on a course blog regularly can help them keep up with the reading and/or various stages of the project. Blog assignments can be especially useful in courses with a large number of students, or courses where students have few opportunities for class discussion.