Last week Thursday I continued to work on my non-profit organization mobile app for Brooklyn Chamber of Commerce. As I was setting up my tabs, mapping out which information from the site will go under which tab, my supervisor Mr. Lawson came over to my computer and looked over the site again to make sure it was suitable for a mobile app. After looking through the site Mr. Lawson concluded that I shouldn’t use this site, and then we sat down and searched for a new non-profit organization that I can create this mobile app for.
After a few minutes we found a great non-profit organization site called Stomp Out Bullying, which is a site that talks about bullying, the reason why kids bully other kids, and how to get help, and how to report it to teachers and parents. This site had the works on bullying right down to the different types and kinds of bullying. This really stuck out for Mr. Lawson and I and he gave me the “Go” to start working on the mobile app.
Thursday I started the research on this site, read their mission statement, and history. I clicked on every tab and within every tab are links to information to get help to stop bullies from bullying, and the break down on different types of bullying, example gay bullying. Now that all the content are in the specific tabs that I havr created, all I have to do now is add their images and logo from their website to the mobile app and published it in the android market and iTunes.
Dear Josephine,
This sounds quite interesting. I look forward to seeing how the app looks when it’s finished. In future entries work on avoiding run-on sentences. The first sentence in your second paragraph would work much better if it were divided into two sentences. Also, double check spelling before posting. You wrote “havr” when you meant to write “have.”
Professor Mason
Thanks prof. Mason I did notice that after I post the journal, and yes I see what you mean about the second paragraph, I will fix it and republish my entry
Good! That’s how we keep improving.
Professor Mason