I chose to focus on researching Kisi inc., the company in which I will be interning with this semester. I know the value of knowing some information before hand. This prevents that deer in headlights expression when asked questions.
After finishing some stuff up for BTTIP, I felt very excited to this fresh start, and opportunity. I know that the program is very competitive and I am glad to be one of the select few chosen to participate.
Kisi Inc is a start up company there for I hope to make a great impression and capitalize on a possible job opportunity upon completion.
– O’Nysha Thomas
We need more context here. Assume that your readers don’t know what BTTIP stands for. You need to explain it to them. Also, your entries are a bit short. I’m requiring 250-300 words per week. I’m sure you have lots to tell us.
Professor Mason