For my assignment, I have collected few main points. My conclusion draft is almost complete. I am having trouble finding a good hook. I am expecting to submit my assignment on time.…
Author: Sangay Dolma
Outline Op-Ed–Sangay Dolma
- Introduction
- Hook: open with referring to an entertainment show.
- History of racism.
- Personal narrative:
- My own experience as a victim.
- Being more aware of my Asianness.
- Support from my friends.
- Statistics:
- Percentage of incidents increased or decreased.
- Current situation.
- Conclusion:
Mentor Text Analysis-Sangay Dolma
The article i read was, “Floyed’s Death Shows We Cannot Wait To End Racism” by Eddie S. Glaude jr. In the introduction, the author brings attention to the recent death of George Floyed, a black man who was killed under …
Project Proposal-Sangay Dolma
My research question is how has the pandemic affected Asian American women?
I would like to convey that sometimes hate crimes are not reported. By not talking about it, racist acts continue. The audience I am trying to reach is …
RBG Op-Ed Analysis-Sangay
Main Idea: The main idea of this article is that there has been significant progress in women’s occupation, still many discriminatory barriers to overcome.
1.What is the tone?
The tone of this op-ed piece is encouraging because the author says, …
Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative-Sangay.
After reading Professor Wu’s feedback on my FD#1, I would like to revise few things during my spring break. Firstly, I have to think of a better title. I need a whole new paragraph in conclusion to deliver the main …
RAB Conclusion-Sangay.
After searching for information on how the pandemic affects Asian American women’s fear of being attacked, it gave me a deeper understanding of why Asian women are often the victims of racist attacks. For me, the thought of being harassed …
RAB Source Entry#2 — Sangay
PART1 MLA CITATION
Dewan, Shaila. “How Has Racism and Sexism Intertwine to Torment Asian-American Women” New York Times, 18 Mar. 2021. https://www.nytimes.com/2021/03/18/us/racism-sexism-atlanta-spa-shooting.html
MAIN IDEA: Racism and sexism intertwined to torment Asian American women.
SUPPORTING DETAIL1: The attacks on …
RAB Source Entry#3-Sangay.
PART 1: MLA CITATION
Walker, Amara, reporter. “Anxious to Let My Features Show: Asian American Women Share Fear of Harassment.” CNN, 29 Mar. 2022.
PART 2: SUMMARY
CNN News correspondent Amara Walker reported in the CNN news …
RAB Source Entry1-Sangay.
PART1: MLA CITATION
Karen Zraick. “Man Charged With Hate Crimes After 7 Asian Women Are Attacked in 2 Hours.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 3 Mar. 2022, www.nytimes.com/2022/03/02/nyregion/asian-women-attacked-nypd.html.
MAIN IDEA (MI) Asian American women are increasingly …
