hello my first weeks experience of cooed has been pretty good and easy because its easy to just open up my laptop and start class rather than having to go all the way to college.  Also all the teachers are really nice and there hasn’t been that much work and I feel like its going to be a good year. the only bad thing is not being able to socialize.

MY JOB AT AN APPLE PLANT:

The thesis statement is that the work was very hard and the conditions were very bad. In the first paragraph it says that the job made enormous demands. this shows that the job was very hard. also in the second paragraph it says that the pay was very bad. also in the third paragraph it says that the conditions were very bad the supervisor didn’t consider about their workers health