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  1. Alicia,

    Nice work! The structure and overall flow of your info-graphic read very well.
    Here are my thoughts:

    1. What typeface did you use? I think your overall layout would benefit from a little variation in your type, maybe just a two word bold header (same point size and same leading) for each little blurb of text.
    2. Last sentence in the intro paragraph should read: “This technology has some arguing its ethical use.”
    3. Clean up any awkward hyphens and widows.
    4. I think the space between the two columns in the middle section (Advantage and Disadvantage) is too far apart. I would make your page margins wider and reduce the space between these two columns.
    5. I also think the headers for both columns should specify Advantage and Disadvantage of what… (Genome Editing)
    6. Love your icons! Maybe add a little space between the bottom and top of text in between.

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