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Category: Midterm CRitique (Page 2 of 3)

Midterm Critique

October 19, 2021 / / 1 Comment

The first photo is with a frozen motion, the women look like a busy traveler. But the light of the photo a little dark.

I like this photo , is very nice of depth of field present.

The man of this photo look like a model. And the diagonals composition make the photo more interesting .

Critique by Lisbeth M. / Jazziah C. work

October 19, 2021 / / 1 Comment
I was drawn this photo because of the contrast that the color of the flower and the leaves in the back make, I also like the fact that we can notice the seasonal change by looking at the rose petals.
I really love that he was able to capture the bees sitting on the flowers, it is really hard to do and the depth of field created by the background is really cool, he also used he rule of thirds.
The vibrant color of the flowers make contrast with the dead grass and I like the fact that his focus is on the purple floors rather than the white ones. I also like that he filled the frame with the flowers.
This is my favorite one, it has a romantic feel to it and I love the singular red rose in the middle of the frame. I also like the contrast of the red and green and the amount of exposure he used.

Midterm Critique Lisbeth

October 19, 2021 / / 1 Comment
I really like this photo, despite it being just leaves it looks like a figure. Taking the form of a creature of nature. It shows rules of thirds.. With the brown leaves being in focus and the green lack of focus brings out the shape.
I love how close she got to the tree trunk, it also shows how simple things we gloss over. But if we take he time to look at the simple things, it shows how beautiful it is.
The photo looks like, the world just froze in time. The shutter speed and ISO makes the water look clear and tangible.
The flowers grabbed my attention, the orange ones in focus shows that there is still some beauty in the fall. With the leaves in less focus in the background it draws attention to the flowers even more.

Jeremy Dueñas’ Critique | John Gregorios Midterm Shoot # 1

October 19, 2021 / / 1 Comment
  • This photo does a fantastic job of tying in many key elements of photography. The arches of the bench create a frame within a frame, and the focus of the landscape with the backlight of the sun setting isn’t lost by the focus or blurring of the objects within the picture.
  • This photo feels very inviting. With it’s shallow depth of field and focus on that center part of the photo, the entire foreground and background are blurred. Even with this, you can still tell that this is the iconic Coney Island boardwalk at sunset. For that reason alone I find this picture to be amazing.
  • This photo has a great frame within a frame effect, and the spacing and framing of the lines is absolutely perfect. The bottom third of the photo does a great job of setting the environment without taking focus from the subject within the frame of the neon lights in the top two thirds of the photo.
  • This nighttime photo is a fantastic use of available light from the neon sign. There are likely people in the far background of the photo, but the use of the darkens has them out of sight, creating a very ominous feel to this nighttime photo.
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