Through the process of writing this portrait the hardest part was to find what word/phrase I should use because usually I think of these words/phrases unconsciously and it just happens without me even knowing it. So it was hard to be conscious of the word/phrase and actually understand what I think about it. The easiest part would be literally writing about the prase because I just had to type on my computer which was the easiest thing to do since Iβve been doing it a lot since online learning started. I also had to do 2-3 drafts for the Portrait. The first one was of all my ideas. The second one was a short version of the portrait. The last one was the long draft of the portrait. While doing the workshop I learned what was important to me and it felt a bit weird because I never really have the time or thought about the things that were important to me other than family and school. The revisions I want to make in my essay would be to make it more organized and not all over the place so my readers will understand what Iβm talking about. I also want to make it more simple and understanding because my phrase is connected to many of my thoughts so itβs like a chain of thoughts and ideas so I have to make it simple and explain how the things are connected to each other.
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It’s been a difficult year for us, for the groups we belong to, so let’s write about it!
I’m Jackie Blain, and you can find me on our Slack workspace or via email DBlain@citytech.cuny.edu.
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