While writing this draft that things that was hard for me were making new ideas, making longer paragraphs and finding better writing strategies. The easiest parts for me was talking about my culture and giving details about it. For this writing I did only two drafts because I was satisfied with what I had written. The stuff I went through this paper was a lot. At first I did not know what to write about and did not had any ideas, and then it came to me to choose something from my culture.

My experience with doing the work shop was really good because I got a lot of feedback which helped me to make corrections to my paper. For the final draft hope to make my essay longer and to have a better flow so that it can have the readers more engaged.