Practice Session 1
I like how Lili starts her writing with repetition. “We… we… we……” It actually isn’t good to set in the first sentence of an article. But Lili … Read More
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Practice 1
Lili Velez started magnificently, it gives a clear vision of what she wrote in the piece of writing. So as soon as the readers read the part, it … Read More
Practice Session 1
As a reader, the way Lili started the writing was very catchy and created the anticipation to keep reading as she used the beginning of the first … Read More
One of my first experiences with technology was when I used play video games. Around 2006 or 2007, I remember when we got a new desktop computer, I saw my … Read More
Practice 1
When in high school and task with providing helpful feedback to my peer and felt that my advice had no real impact on their writing. Even when I … Read More
Practise 1
How LiLi Velez started her story was so catchy and interesting most importantly as to how it basically talks a lot more about how lives are like once … Read More
PRACTICE 1
Lili Velez’s excerpt starts off incredibly strong, its very straight to the point as it is descriptive. However, what stood out to me the most was how much … Read More
My first memory with technology was around 2007 when I was about 5 years old. I remember my brother and I getting a Windows computer from our parents I was … Read More
One of my first uses of technology was when my mother got the first IPhone. Back in the year 2007, Apple released their first ever smartphone the IPhone. I have … Read More
- Write for seven minutes about your first memory of technology. What, when, who was there, why, how.
– Technology is really a great thing. In today’s world it is … Read More
First Day Word Cloud
