Practice Session 1
I like how Lili starts her writing with repetition. “We… we… we……” It actually isn’t good to set in the first sentence of an article. But Lili
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Practice 1
Lili Velez started magnificently, it gives a clear vision of what she wrote in the piece of writing. So as soon as the readers read the part, it
Practice Session 1
As a reader, the way Lili started the writing was very catchy and created the anticipation to keep reading as she used the beginning of the first
One of my first experiences with technology was when I used play video games. Around 2006 or 2007, I remember when we got a new desktop computer, I saw my
Practice 1
When in high school and task with providing helpful feedback to my peer and felt that my advice had no real impact on their writing. Even when I
Practise 1
How LiLi Velez started her story was so catchy and interesting most importantly as to how it basically talks a lot more
PRACTICE 1
Lili Velez’s excerpt starts off incredibly strong, its very straight to the point as it is descriptive. However, what stood out to me the most was how much
My first memory with technology was around 2007 when I was about 5 years old. I remember my brother and I getting a Windows computer from our parents I was
One of my first uses of technology was when my mother got the first IPhone. Back in the year 2007, Apple released their first ever smartphone the IPhone. I have
- Write for seven minutes about your first memory of technology. What, when, who was there, why, how.
– Technology is really a great thing. In today’s world it is
First Day Word Cloud
