Think of times before technology was as it is today. It must’ve been very difficult back then as compared to now. I always questioned how they communicate, how they stayed
Category: Unit 1 (Page 1 of 9)
Since using technology is basically second nature to me, I can’t imagine myself not using technology. In the past where technology wasn’t as big and in depth as it is
Since the beginning of time there has been an eternal entity known as the “Phantom”. This lifeform isn’t in control of itself and needs a living being to be it’s
Practice Session #1
Overall, I believe that the piece written by Lili Velez was great overall. Lets start on how she started the excerpt. “We panic, we pack, we get
Practice #1
Lili Velez Has a great topic and she captures the reader’s attention as soon as we start reading . The story was very interesting because I felt Identify
Practice 1 – I find Lily’s intro to be an interesting one. This writing seems to be directed towards younger college students, so she immediately starts with a fun intro
PRACTICE 1:
Lili Valez started her writing involving the readers stating “we”. I liked the use of commas and full stops in her writing that created the pauses when needed.
Practice #1.
Lili Velez has a great structure of starting point. As a reader I felt the story was very interesting because it was engaging me to kept read. ”
Personally, I loved Lili’s introduction because she stated what most people felt on the way to college. She did a great job catching the readers attention because after I read
“We panic, we pack, we get to college, and then panic again, moaning, “I wish I had known I’d need this!” “This” could be anything from that extra pillow to
First Day Word Cloud
