Think of times before technology was as it is today. It must’ve been very difficult back then as compared to now. I always questioned how they communicate, how they stayed … Read More
Category: Unit 1 (Page 1 of 9)
Since using technology is basically second nature to me, I can’t imagine myself not using technology. In the past where technology wasn’t as big and in depth as it is … Read More
Since the beginning of time there has been an eternal entity known as the “Phantom”. This lifeform isn’t in control of itself and needs a living being to be it’s … Read More
Practice Session #1
Overall, I believe that the piece written by Lili Velez was great overall. Lets start on how she started the excerpt. “We panic, we pack, we get … Read More
Practice #1
Lili Velez Has a great topic and she captures the reader’s attention as soon as we start reading . The story was very interesting because I felt Identify … Read More
Practice 1 – I find Lily’s intro to be an interesting one. This writing seems to be directed towards younger college students, so she immediately starts with a fun intro … Read More
PRACTICE 1:
Lili Valez started her writing involving the readers stating “we”. I liked the use of commas and full stops in her writing that created the pauses when needed. … Read More
Practice #1.
Lili Velez has a great structure of starting point. As a reader I felt the story was very interesting because it was engaging me to kept read. ” … Read More
Personally, I loved Lili’s introduction because she stated what most people felt on the way to college. She did a great job catching the readers attention because after I read … Read More
“We panic, we pack, we get to college, and then panic again, moaning, “I wish I had known I’d need this!” “This” could be anything from that extra pillow to … Read More
First Day Word Cloud
