Ali Ahmed

05-01-2016

ENG 1121 – D465

Research Essay 7 Points Peer Review

7 Points Peer Review – Farzana Khan

1. Farzana stated with a quote from a famous person which really strong and it’s connected to her essay.
2. She have a good thesis with 3 subtopic.
3. Fazana have 3 subtopics also she have 2 sub-subtopics.
4. She have good topics sentences which include subtopics.
5. Farzana Used 3 quotes on her first subtopic also second subtopics too but she didn’t do in text citation.
6. She have few translation phrase which is really good.
7. She didn’t write her conclusion yet.