ENG 1121 – D465
Research Essay 7 Points Peer Review
7 Points Peer Review – Farzana Khan
- Farzana stated with a quote from a famous person which really strong and it’s connected to her essay.
- She have a good thesis with 3 subtopic.
- Fazana have 3 subtopics also she have 2 sub-subtopics.
- She have good topics sentences which include subtopics.
- Farzana Used 3 quotes on her first subtopic also second subtopics too but she didn’t do in text citation.
- She have few translation phrase which is really good.
- She didn’t write her conclusion yet.