Partner’s new Audience for Paragraph #1 of personal Narrative Essay

Ali Ahmed


ENG 1121 – D465

Free Write

Elbert Yan was born in Chinatown. He didn’t remember anything about his younger life but he heard that he was too addicted to the computer. His brother gave him a suggestion that he should major in computers when he finished high school and start college. He listened to his brother, now his majoring in Computer Systems of Technology in City tech and he will finish his Bachelor’s Degree. This is his second year and fourth semester in City Tech. He believe one day day, he will able to work in the IT department of any company and live a very happy life.