Ali Ahmed

05-17-2016

ENG 1121 – D465

7 Points peer review for Partners first draft research essay

1. Jaouad have a good opener which is connected to his topic and his research essay.
2. He has good thesis with three sub topic but it’s not debatable.
3. He has 6 body paragraphs which include 3 sub topics with topics sentences also sub subtopics paragraphs.
4. He has few translation words but it could be better if he had more.
5. He has work cited page but he didn’t do in text citation. Also, he didn’t put alphabetical order.
6. He has few grammar mistakes which is needed to work on quotation marks and commas.
7. He has a good conclusion which is he restates his thesis and explained his topics again.