Ali Ahmed

05-04-2016

ENG 1121 – D465

Partners 7 Point review of Introduction

1. My partner started with good sentence which was introducing the person he writing about.
2. He didn’t wrote thesis but he mention different point of that person’s life like subtopics.
3. He has lot of subtopics which was about telling that person life story and what he likes.
4. He used topic sentences on his introduction and it tells what the introduction going to be.
5. He has few translation phrase which is good.
6. He don’t have conclusion but he have good conclude sentence which was really good.