ENG 1121 – D465
Partners 7 Point review of Introduction
- My partner started with good sentence which was introducing the person he writing about.
- He didn’t wrote thesis but he mention different point of that person’s life like subtopics.
- He has lot of subtopics which was about telling that person life story and what he likes.
- He used topic sentences on his introduction and it tells what the introduction going to be.
- He has few translation phrase which is good.
- He don’t have conclusion but he have good conclude sentence which was really good.