Coronavirus and vaccine

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  1. Maurine

    Fatoumata sources are complete because she had nice details on everything but I feel like source 1 was missing a analysis maybe because I ain’t see a paragraph for it but overall its good.

    I found source 1 the most interesting because it said “it takes about 16 weeks to identify the virus in your respiratory system” and that’s something I didn’t know and the way she wrote the summary was good.

    One transition phrase from fatoumata I like was she pointed out the important parts that stood out to her in her analysis.

  2. Anaya Massiah

    Fatou’s sources are mostly complete because most entries have 2 quotes, an analysis, and a summary. Though the first source doesn’t have a designated analysis paragraph, it is well detailed and informative.

    Source 1 was most informative to me because it describes the process of finding a vaccine, how long that may take, why it’s important, and how countries took precaution against coronavirus.

    One transition I like is when Fatou said the doctors are coming up with vaccines, but they make take a year to 18 months to find it.

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