After reading Professor Wu’s notes on my RAB final draft,I realized she was right in stating I can word the entire piece better. In most of my rhetorical analysis sections, I was rather vague in my writing and not really digging in to the article like I should’ve.My reflections were also very surface level and lacked the amount of substance the assignment calls for. Putting more time into the assignment and really looking at what should be included. Definitely need to go to the tutors to help me out.