English Composition II

Category: Unit 3 (Page 4 of 7)

Unit 3 Final Poem

The mountainous climb is strenuous.

But the nonvenomous metal snake won’t give up the climb, making the view affectious.

Zigzagging through the mountain the railroad conquers the snowy paradise.

The ice-cold air penetrates the windows, but soaking with the view one cannot fathom the chilliness.

The bird’s eye view as we unwind terrace after terrace brings a sense of accomplishment.

The mountain top, here we come!  

The mountain top, here we come!

Across the world we have traveled, to dine on white.

The snowy canopies are a welcoming view, a glimpse of what you are about to witness.

Her beauty of a queen covers the landscape, and all she does is impress.

The mixed sound of the snake hissing as its breaking wheels rail press.

And the shouts from within its belly

The mountain top, here we come!

 

The mountain top, here we come!

Our monstrous presence on the rail does not intimidate the mountain.

She swallows us, and we crawl through her rocky belly.

Up we move to confirm the adage, there is light at the end of the tunnel.

We are hopeful of the magnificence of the mountain top view.

The mountain top, here we come!

The mountain top, here we come

Now I can view the whole world as the sun strokes my cheeks

We made it, the beauty is breathtaking and it will linger in my head for weeks.

The beauty mocks me not to close my eyes, in her presence I am meek.

And the air is sweet at the peak as the sign confirms, welcome to Switzerland.

The Mountain top, here we are.

Unit 3 final draft

Artist statement:

In making this piece, I wanted to inspire people around our age that may be in college or high school and dealing with mental health problems, or even learning to just take care of themselves. I wanted to show that self care can be anything that makes you feel whole as a person, just doing anything that brings a shine into your day.

I believe that doing a comic strip was the best way to reach the audience because I wanted to show illustrations. I feel that by illustrating what self-care may be, they can see that they can do the same for themselves. I also thought it might be more attractive to my audience allowing them to see that anything can promote your health, mentality, and your well-being overall.

My progress doing this piece for unit 3 was enjoyable. I’d say it felt like taking care of myself the way I felt serotonin just designing the comic strips how I like it. It also reminded me how important it is to take care of myself and just devoting time to taking care of my mental, physical, emotional, and spiritual health. I feel that if I did want to do things differently, I could’ve done a POV comic strip of self-care rather than just illustrating different types of ways of taking care of yourself.

However, I do hope that my audience that views the strips can see that there is more than just pampering yourself. I would like them to be inspired to do the same for themselves and focus on making themselves happy as a person.

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