English Composition II

Week 13

Unit 1 revision

After re-reading my unit one Portrait of a Word there are certain things that I felt like I did very well on. For example, making the reader picture themselves in scenes where I’m using the word. I could pull out and add certain things that can help improve the reader’s experience. For instance, not boredom with many words where is for, I can actually break down the meaning of a sentence in a shorter way.  Another thing that I could help improve with the reader experience is possibly talk more about where the word has originated from or even how it was it invented.  In other words, background about the word.

1 Comment

  1. Prof. Edelson

    Kobe! I completely agree with you in every respect. I especially look forward to learning about the history of the word.
    Prof. Edelson

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