When i first looked at your project 2 & 3 I was confused by what you are trying to showcase to your viewer. From what I see now, your topics are interesting. The sketches overall are very clean, but the visual hierarchy I’m not sure where to look from start to finish.
There is a lot of information going on in your thumbnails, is there a way you can simply these ideas?
Arrange your elements so there is more of a flow?
Also, are you designing this as a blown-up poster like 24 by 36? If you blow it up to this size, your concept might work.
How’s it going Daniel?
A frog would make for a great subject matter for both parts of the project. The life cycle and then an anatomy of. I think you could make it work 11×17.”
Hi Daniel,
When i first looked at your project 2 & 3 I was confused by what you are trying to showcase to your viewer. From what I see now, your topics are interesting. The sketches overall are very clean, but the visual hierarchy I’m not sure where to look from start to finish.
There is a lot of information going on in your thumbnails, is there a way you can simply these ideas?
Arrange your elements so there is more of a flow?
Also, are you designing this as a blown-up poster like 24 by 36? If you blow it up to this size, your concept might work.
How’s it going Daniel?
A frog would make for a great subject matter for both parts of the project. The life cycle and then an anatomy of. I think you could make it work 11×17.”