Thesis Statement:
In today society many women even some man get their nails done at salons since it does take patience to do our own; but the question is how did nails come to be, where was it developed and if it is safe to consistently get our nails done based on the liquids being used to create the beauty design of nails. I want to explain the history and outcomes if certain products damage our natural nail or keep it protected underneath while the nail on top being shown by the artificial nail.
Hey Amaris, I think your topic is very interesting! Your sketches show a clear hierarchy and I see that you provided information in them as well. I think for your diagram showing an image of a hand and each finger showing a step in the process of getting your nails done would be an interesting way in showing that information about your topic. or you could also show the different types of nails or the damage that could happen to them. I would just focus on showing your information visually so you don’t end up with too much text in your design.
Hi Amaris, I like your topic, the information is clear and your topic is very interesting. Each section shows different information about nails. I think giving a little information on the price would be interesting too.