After looking at some of the work I have done in the pass, there are many things that I want to fix. One key things is all the silly grammar and run on sentences I possibly made on the work. I want my work to be clear of mistakes. I want my work to be easily understood by everyone so they can see what I was thinking while writing. To be honest, there are many things I would want to revise. Possibly, the big thing I want to do is expand on the ideas I have created. I want to add more to it so it can feel more fleshed out. I want people to gain a message when reading the essay that I wrote. I don’t want it to be a story. I just want it to be an inspiration.
To create my portfolio, I need to write something that can connect with people. Something they can sympathize with. When writing my portfolio, I want the people reading it to get a clear message of what I’m trying to write and tell them. I want people to remember my writing as if it wear a memory. When writing, I am going to use multiple pieces of figurative language because I want to have the portfolio feel fun. I don’t like it when writing is boring so a key thing I like to do is keep my writing fun. The last thing I am going to do is not have any grammar mistakes and run on sentences because I want to keep my portfolio “short and simple”.