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Practice Session #1

Overall, I believe that the piece written by Lili Velez was great overall. Lets start on how she started the excerpt. “We panic, we pack, we get … Read More

Practice  #1

Lili Velez Has a great topic and she captures the reader’s attention as soon as we start reading . The story was very interesting because I felt Identify … Read More

Practice 1 – I find Lily’s intro to be an interesting one. This writing seems to be directed towards younger college students, so she immediately starts with a fun intro … Read More

PRACTICE 1:

Lili Valez started her writing involving the readers stating “we”. I liked the use of commas and full stops in her writing that created the pauses when needed. … Read More

Practice #1.

Lili Velez has a great structure of starting point. As a reader I felt  the story was very interesting because it was engaging me to kept read. ” … Read More

Personally, I loved Lili’s introduction because she stated what most people felt on the way to college. She did a great job catching the readers attention because after I read … Read More

“We panic, we pack, we get to college, and then panic again, moaning, “I wish I had known I’d need this!” “This” could be anything from that extra pillow to … Read More

Practice Session 1

I like how Lili starts her writing with repetition. “We… we… we……” It actually isn’t good to set in the first sentence of an article. But Lili … Read More

Practice 1

Lili Velez started magnificently, it gives a clear vision of what she wrote in the piece of writing. So as soon as the readers read the part, it … Read More

Practice Session 1

As a reader, the way Lili started the writing was very catchy and created the anticipation to keep reading as she used the beginning of the first … Read More