7 Points of Peer Review Research Paper

Pang Yen Wu

 

Professor Elizabeth Guthrie

 

ENG 1101-D376

 

12/08/15

7 Points of Peer Review

1. Operner:

“The IRS, they’re like the Mafia,they can take anythiing they want,”by Jerry Seinfeld.

1. Thesis

Lastly.The Gambino Family is one of the notorious mafia groups of all time throughout their violence,origin,and power.

 

1. Topic sentence for each subtopic’s and subsubtopic paragraph

1The Gambino Family is known for their ruthless nature by its origin during the 1930s until today

2.Violence is one of the many reason why the Gambino Family is one of the most notorious mafia groups of all time.

3.Power is one of the main reasons why the Gambino Family achieves many success of becoming the most well-known mafia groups of all time.

subsubtopic sentences not clearly shown.

    4)Transitional/words

In paragraph 2 and 3 he use it in there.

      5) Grammar

Missing one word at the last line of paragraph 2.

6)Quotes and Referencing ( MLA Guidelines)

He using a book called “Five Families:The Rise,Decline,and Resurgence of America’s Most Powerful Mafia Empires.

And he using  a Documentary call “The Gambino Crime Family”     

7) Conclusion

He restate the thesis and related to a bigger thought.